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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
Rejected Words, filled with hate and hurt words become swords that cut to the core Emotions are neglected as the blade is released and pierces the heart inflicting a fatal wound. Cast out into the dark once again, as demanded by fate when will the mind learn what the soul knows...solitude No physical pain can compare to the pain of the soul being denouced while the heart is torn asunder Displaced in time rejected the soul and heart die Never able to function again. |
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achicade Member
since 2000-04-02
Posts 66Marietta, GA USA |
Yes, words can hurt. We must all be careful and choose carefully before we open our mouths...Good one! |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
these are my words to you... i hope the title of this creation is not the truth. please don't allow the imperfections of humans pillage & tear from you the perfect gift you possess. if it helps, i'm willing to listen, or is it read??? =) circle-k@bolt.com |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
you title made you think you are not gonna post anymore...glad it's not that! LOL this is great work...Dhuron... IT's sad but well written... If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao |
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NamelessOne Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 197Biloxi MS |
Emotionally charged words, powerful. you moved me with this one dhuron ,i just hope that the title isn`t true. |
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just_another_fe Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 483MICHIGAN |
great poem.....ur not really leavin are you?  Don't fear failure so much that you refuse to try new things. The saddest summary of a life contains three descriptions: could have, might have, and should have. --Louis Boone |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
The last post is the one we cling to the most. It must be stronger, more steady and this was. I see another post for you....and another...and another.... Kathleen |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
dh~ Soo very sad, hate to think you are feeling this way~ Hope our replies can cheer you up a bit. Tracie~ Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
Thanks everyone, I wrote this a few weeks back, at a very very low point after a really bad fight with a close friend. That is how I felt. I posted here as my last orginal post for awhile. But I'll still be here reading and replying to all the other wonderful poems. The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship." --Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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