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Walter Poe
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since 1999-10-13
Posts 787


0 posted 2000-04-11 11:50 AM


my blood flows
the wound burns
pain flares inside
muscles stiffen
colours flash in my eyes
red blue green
i know death comes
as the teeth dig in
ripping my flesh
huge chunks of me gone
the horn sounds
my lifes end
then the demons come
Man Horse
Horse man
flesh of my enemy
Blood of my blood
i am broken
alone without kin
no love beside
the killers preside
over my brothers will
Red in my eyes
fills all the sky
as i slip again
the evil that kills
without the will
to fight me eye to eye



  Hello darkness, my old friend,
I've come to talk with you again,
Because a vision softly creeping,
Left its seeds while I was sleeping,
And the vision that was planted in my brain
Still remains
Within the sound of silence.

© Copyright 2000 Paul Weatherstone - All Rights Reserved
Joel the wolf
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
1 posted 2000-04-11 08:51 PM


It look’s like you my friend have been on the same battle field as I.
Very strong.
Joel.

Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

2 posted 2000-04-11 11:01 PM


hello darkness my old friend...
I've come to talk with you again(smile)

i've missed your poems here of late...
thought maybe you took a holiday or spring break...
glad your posting again.

Blood of my blood
i am broken
alone without kin
no love beside
the killers preside
over my brothers will
Red in my eyes
fills all the sky
as i slip again
the evil that kills
without the will
to fight me eye to eye
------------------

very powerful words Mr.Poe...and the always present-- vivid imagery, so perfect...very well written my poetic friend.
take care, jm

 Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders
And it makes me want to touch you there.
And the light in your eyes makes me feel
Like there's something much better out there
Something kind...
And I know someday I might be looking around
Trying to find some purpose
Well purpose it can't be that hard to find
As long as I've got the wind...
The wind and your love to carry me.
vertical horizon



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