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dhuron
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since 2000-03-19
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0 posted 2000-04-11 11:26 AM


Embracing the Dark
Shunning the Light
Finding comfort
that was deprived by the light

Thriving in the Night
The howling of wolves
Music to my ears, the
elegant beauty of the moon

Peace is found
in the forbidding dark
The Silver Moon shines down
illuminating the splendid terrain

A slight breeze gently glides
across my warm cheek, the faint
sound of leaves rustling in the distance
The calming sounds from the creatures

Such Peace in the Night
Harmony in every aspect
A faint glow from the lake
Leaves dancing in the air

The stars adding to the spectacular
Chirping of grasshoppers
Hooting of Owls
Song of the Wind
Rippling of the Lake
Allure of the moon
I thrive in the darkness
Where the true Harmony and Splendor
of Nature can be found.



 The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship."

--Ralph Waldo Emerson


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Walter Poe
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since 1999-10-13
Posts 787

1 posted 2000-04-11 11:41 AM


The darkness where solice is found is false
we exist there in deference to the norm in a hope of being different or of being the same it is all we know or all we long to be

  Hello darkness, my old friend,
I've come to talk with you again,
Because a vision softly creeping,
Left its seeds while I was sleeping,
And the vision that was planted in my brain
Still remains
Within the sound of silence.

Broken
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since 2000-03-12
Posts 271
The woods
2 posted 2000-04-11 01:37 PM


A slight breeze gently glides
across my warm cheek, the faint
sound of leaves rustling in the distance
The calming sounds from the creatures
******
Great poem Dhuron, you express your emotions so vividly on this one. I to find such peace in the dark night. Take care ~Broken



Joel the wolf
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
3 posted 2000-04-11 11:44 PM


Now your talking my language,  I live where the wolves howl in the night at the moon.
And it is elegant  music of the night.
Joel.

NamelessOne
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since 2000-04-09
Posts 197
Biloxi MS
4 posted 2000-04-12 03:37 AM


Reading your work i can feel the night air and hear the night sounds, great work dhuron  you took me away to that dark safe place.
Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

5 posted 2000-04-12 08:07 AM


a night to dance to. words to fall softly when the sun fades, this was lovely...

 Kathleen


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with you
6 posted 2000-04-12 03:41 PM


Dhuron~ this is really nice, I like the night up here in the mountains.....peaceful. -SEA
ShadowHeart
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since 2000-03-25
Posts 49

7 posted 2000-04-12 04:42 PM


Good Job! I like this...

 Love is our greatest weakness
but when it's found,
it's our greatest strength.

Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
8 posted 2000-04-12 09:49 PM


This poem and feelings portrayed are blissful Daniel,  I loved the last verse...
Great work here my friend  

 A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



AVANTI
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 664
INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE
9 posted 2000-04-13 02:53 AM


dhuron...
great work! something about the night..


 If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves
from which evolves the light...
Avanti Rao

Dark Usagi
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since 2000-04-10
Posts 18
Oviedo, FL, USA
10 posted 2000-04-13 08:26 AM


Wow...this is...wow...GREAT! I am speechless... just wow...

 "Pictures are so perfect...in a perfect moment until you look into their eyes and truley see the storms of their soul"-Dark Usagi

StarrGazer
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since 2000-03-05
Posts 679
Texas
11 posted 2000-04-13 08:47 AM


dhuron excellent !! well spoken  for all us nocturnal people  

 Mystical being
which makes ink flow
Surround me in
your incandescent glow
Fill my brain with
thoughts and rhyme
As I try to capture
but a moment in time
~Shan~


sKiTtLeS
Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 113
wisconsin, u.s.a.
12 posted 2000-04-13 10:34 AM


~Peace is found in the forbidding dark...~

Don't we know it?
Great post, I like this one a lot.

sKiTtLeS~

dhuron
Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476

13 posted 2000-04-14 02:25 PM


thank you everyone for your replies and comments of this poem.  



 The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship."

--Ralph Waldo Emerson


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