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The Jackal
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since 1999-08-13
Posts 426
Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A

0 posted 2000-04-11 12:24 PM


some things never stop motioning
a cancer to illuminate
all things..chained to hate
nothing changes..just the lack of reasons
i fear therefore.. i endure
forcing my answers
to have honest emotion
then perhaps..ill matter once more

© Copyright 2000 John Dixon - All Rights Reserved
JOY 14
Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA
1 posted 2000-04-11 10:50 AM


"then perhaps... I'll matter once more" Could it possibly be that you matter now?  I'm sure you do, or why would you be here?
Have hope.

Joy

Walter Poe
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since 1999-10-13
Posts 787

2 posted 2000-04-11 11:27 AM


What is the world but emotions in storms blown on a sea of minds

What is lost can be found again

everyone counts

this is my reaction to your poem

That is clear to me

  Hello darkness, my old friend,
I've come to talk with you again,
Because a vision softly creeping,
Left its seeds while I was sleeping,
And the vision that was planted in my brain
Still remains
Within the sound of silence.

Joel the wolf
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
3 posted 2000-04-11 09:24 PM


No matter how one might try to differ or lie to our selves, your honest answers are here, in your writing. Therefore you matter.
Joel.

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