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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland 
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Others fail to understand, I am an unknown, No more can I believe, No more can I stand to be alone. I'm merely a shooting star, Admired but not understood, Do you dare to really look inside? See what is under my hood? I doubt so, For it is where sane men dare to tread, I cannot be held responsible, One look and you may be dead. Ticking time bomb, Set to implode, Perhaps that'll ease the burden, Ease the eternal load. It is all a fantasy, Cruel realities too much to bear, Lord I pray take my soul right now, For it hurts too much too care. A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Isis~ Are you ok? If you need to talk, I'm here. You can e-mail me ok?  -SEA |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Isis, just when you think that no one understands you. . . someone appears out of the mist. . . "For it is where sane men dare to tread" How about INsane men? Excellent words, my friend. . . -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
wow isis, this is powerful girl... very deep and laced with dark edges... well written.. very well!! take care, jm Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders And it makes me want to touch you there. And the light in your eyes makes me feel Like there's something much better out there Something kind... And I know someday I might be looking around Trying to find some purpose Well purpose it can't be that hard to find As long as I've got the wind... The wind and your love to carry me. vertical horizon |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Sea I'm ok, nothing serious!! perhaps my blood sugar was low..  Sven and Janet Marie my thanks as always A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
Great Work Isis, "Others fail to understand, I am an unknown, No more can I believe, No more can I stand to be alone." Very Powerful stanza. This has to be one of your best, I am going to print it. Take care Daniel The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship." --Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Isis~ What an emotional piece, felt the pain deep inside. Sometimes we feel like noone understands, when we are in need They don't listen, because it's off us that they do feed We are their bumper and never the other way round We are the fox and they're always the hound Oneday we'll just give in, won't take it anymore And it won't be to us, their hearts that they do pour This may not relate to your poem, but I thought you could appreciate it. Tracie~ Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
I agree this is good, and powerful, but keep the blood sugar up kid. and hang in there. Joel. |
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ShadowHeart Junior Member
since 2000-03-25
Posts 49 |
Great Job! You might want some candy though...ya know...to keep your bloodsugar up! Anyway, this was great and I loved it...as always. <3 shadow Love is our greatest weakness but when it's found, it's our greatest strength. |
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Hope, tears, and renewal Member
since 2000-03-27
Posts 74 |
This was such a great poem! No one ever really understands, no matter what they may say... but anyway, beautiful writing, as always |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Thanks everyone Thanks Daniel, best I might not agree with that, but thanks A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
One of your Best Isis. I love all of your poems |
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Zunera Junior Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 30Pakistan |
Extraordinary as usaul Isis !! It was altogether as lovely as the bitter facts. You surely travelled through the trentches of life and love beautifully. All I can say is , " You somehow or the other pull my words from my mouth to sketch them even more beautifully than I could have ." Keep up the spirit Isis !! Take Care, LUV YA Zunera. |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Depth of feeling is in this one for sure. Nice writing. (hope it's just writing and not real feelings) A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Zunera, thanks for the lovely comments.. Danny, a bit of both my friend Thanks all A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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