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songwater
Junior Member

since 2000-04-02

Posts 32
Marietta,Ga.

0 posted 2000-04-10 10:37 PM

To wait for a sun that does not shine.
To wait for a poem that doe's not rhyme.
To wait for the battle to win the war.
To wait all alone behind closed doors.
To pray the prayer to end this run.
To pray to a God who does not come.

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Tony Di Bart
Member

since 2000-01-26

Posts 160
Toronto, Canada

1 posted 2000-04-10 11:01 PM

I like it. Very simple, very easy to understand.

Thanks
see ya

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2000-04-10 11:56 PM

Song~ this was very sad. I liked it though.-SEA

danni
Senior Member

since 1999-11-20

Posts 688
wisconsin

3 posted 2000-04-11 01:39 AM

i could certainly relate to this. i spent too many years waiting. i learned that you cannot wait for things to happen. the opportunities are there, even if hidden well in the shadows. you must be the one to reach out and sieze them. anyway, i enjoyed the read. well done.

dhuron
Member

since 2000-03-19

Posts 476

4 posted 2000-04-11 11:37 AM

I agree with danni. Go out and make things happen. You can not always rely on Fate to do things for you. The chances are there just have to find them. Gread Post

The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship."

--Ralph Waldo Emerson

achicade
Member

since 2000-04-02

Posts 66
Marietta, GA USA

5 posted 2000-04-11 12:31 PM

Some days the sun DOES shine
Some days poems DO rhyme
Battles are no fun but some we WIN
OPEN the door for the sun to come in
KEEP ON PRAYING, not to end the run,
But to be able to reach out and touch the sun. GOD IS THERE and HE LOVES YOU!

God bless you all. :-)
-debbie-

Joel the wolf
Senior Member

since 2000-04-06

Posts 1333
Angels Camp

6 posted 2000-04-11 11:37 PM

SongWater, I see we pray to the same God.
Short and good, to the point...
Joel.

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