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Caitlin
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since 2000-04-09
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0 posted 2000-04-10 09:10 PM


*i'm not really sure if this one fits very well in this forum, but i thought i'd post it anyway!  


you're always the one i run to
when life throws things in my way
you help me clear a path
you always find a way

you listen to me cry
you wipe away my tears
when i dont believe in me
you take away my fears

you try so hard to be my friend
even when i push you away
and you've always been able to tell me
that you'll never ever stray

you always find a way to make me smile
even when my skies are gray
and although we've had our hard times
we're still together today

when i wish upon my stars at night
i have you on my mind
i ask that we'll stay close forever
until the end time

you're the bestfriend that i've ever had
i want you to know that that's true
and no matter where we go from here
i'll go on forever loving you...


© Copyright 2000 Caitlin - All Rights Reserved
SEA
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with you
1 posted 2000-04-11 12:00 PM


Caitlin~ this is wonderful!! Doesn't need to be Dark, it's so loving. I really really like this one!! -SEA
Sven
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2 posted 2000-04-11 12:03 PM


It's wonderful to have someone that loves you so much, and so unconditionally. . . it's ok about being here in dark. . .even we need to see the light every once in a while. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


dhuron
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since 2000-03-19
Posts 476

3 posted 2000-04-12 11:02 AM


Wonderful Love Poem.  Great Job!

 The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship."

--Ralph Waldo Emerson


Joel the wolf
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
4 posted 2000-04-12 07:54 PM


I had to chase this down on pg, 2, I knew it was there, but with work and all, I’m always on the run.
This is what I look for, what I hope for, it’s good to see it in print.
and so very well put.
Thank you
Joel.

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