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SEA
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0 posted 2000-04-10 01:21 PM


This was written with someone here in mind.....for them, not about them!

Good morning sunshine
Good morning day
time to get moving
I'm on my way

Pushing past the darkness
moving away from the pain
I'll hide my heart no longer
Love is never in vain

Your choice~
was to be cruel and cold
My choice~
is to be strong and bold

Embracing life
overflowing love from my heart
I'm done hurting~
I have a fresh new start!
-SEA-

[This message has been edited by SEA (edited 04-10-2000).]

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Joel the wolf
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1 posted 2000-04-10 02:23 PM


I wish I could say that I'm done with the hurt, but I guess I'm not. This is a nice thought, something to work forward to.
Joel. Thank you Sea.
Joel.

Broken
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2 posted 2000-04-10 03:01 PM


Glad to hear you're feeling this way, great poem to. I wish I felt the same way, and maby someday I'll do. Yours truly ~Broken
Caitlin
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3 posted 2000-04-10 03:16 PM


I really liked this poem and I hope I'll find the independence you have soon. I love your work..keep writing  
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4 posted 2000-04-10 03:52 PM


Oh, to have a day like that. This is wonderful....and give hope

 Kathleen


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5 posted 2000-04-11 12:07 PM


Thanks to Joel,Broken, Caitlin, and Irish Rose for reading and liking. -SEA
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6 posted 2000-04-11 01:20 AM


Oh, SEA~
To sail your waters ...
Lovely, my friend.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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JamesMichael
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7 posted 2000-04-11 08:10 AM


It is a beautiful day when we can say enough with the pain...I am ready for happiness and love....it takes a certain amount of desire and fortitude.   James
kynder
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8 posted 2000-04-11 02:59 PM


God truly brought me here.  I have left my entire life behind & moved away from the cruelness.  And I moved to the side of the land by the sea.  For real!!!!  Thank you thank you thank you for this poem.. i say these things to myself EVERY DAY!!!!!!!  i feel like publishers don't know anything about poetry.  they need to come to places like this.   God Bless!!!!  
AVANTI
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9 posted 2000-04-12 12:39 PM


hey thanx!!!
i should read that every morning...may then i'll stop cribbing...
see ya later...i have a print out to take...


 If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves
from which evolves the light...
Avanti Rao

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10 posted 2000-04-12 02:35 AM


Great poem,full of hope and positive energy.  I liked this one a lot
ZuMBLe
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11 posted 2000-04-12 04:26 AM


I love it.. I don't know who it was written for.. But that describes me so well. Dealing with the pain of giving so much love and getting nothing back.  Goodmorning Sunshine Goodmorning day.. this poem definately picked up my spirits.. thank you.
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12 posted 2000-04-12 01:13 PM


Marge~thank you!  

James~ thanks for reading

Kynder~ I'm so glad you liked this  

Avanti~ you're welcome! Happy you liked this

NamelessOne~ thank you

ZuMBLe~ thank you, I'm happy you liked this!
-SEA

dhuron
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13 posted 2000-04-12 07:57 PM


Wonderful Sea.  I love reading yours.  One day I'll move past it as well, one day soon

 The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship."

--Ralph Waldo Emerson


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14 posted 2000-04-12 07:59 PM


Dhuron~ thank you that is so sweet, I hope you can move past it...-SEA
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