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dhuron
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0 posted 2000-04-10 01:41 AM


The Heart plays a melody
Such beautiful melodies
Each on unique
So very soft the melody plays

Faintly I hear the melody
of my heart. A slow melody
of sadness. To any other
a normal melody.

The Days Pass, all
I have is the melody
Sad yet soothing as
it is familiar

How Envious I am,
of those with happy
melodies.  Their heart
know many more joys than mine

Can anyone hear my melody,
does anyone hear?
Will the melody change, will
someone come along and teach
My heart anew?


 The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship."

--Ralph Waldo Emerson


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AVANTI
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1 posted 2000-04-10 02:34 AM


dhuron...
I know what it is when the heart's music...
is sad ...or sometimes...sweet...
well written...
I always wanted to tell you...
I love your signature...
i kept reading it for so many replies...it's such a wonderful one with so much truth...and meaning...


 If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves
from which evolves the light...
Avanti Rao

Michael
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2 posted 2000-04-10 04:27 AM


Keep searching and you will find that which you seek.  beautiful poem... can feel the yearning behind it.


michael

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3 posted 2000-04-10 10:38 PM


Daniel,
       the melody plays in the wind. . . you will find it, all you have to do. . . is listen. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Joel the wolf
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4 posted 2000-04-11 09:55 AM


I hear this melody my friend, and howwwwllll  a long mournful chorus to it in the night
Thank you
Joel.

kynder
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5 posted 2000-04-11 02:48 PM


oh my fellow poet....   my heart aches for you.. my melody also so haunting & solitary.  VERY RARELy do pieces i read move me to tears.  but this here, how is it you hear my melody?  i thought only i could feel like this.. what a place this is!!!!  
dhuron
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since 2000-03-19
Posts 476

6 posted 2000-04-12 11:16 AM


Thank you everyone for your replies.


Avanti, thank you for the kind words. I am glad you like my signature

Michael, well that is all we can do is search, thank you

Sven, Oh, well I need to face the right way then eh?*LOL*

Joel, no thank you for reading my posts!

Kynder, thank you for your words.  yes my heart often plays a sad tune, but here recently it has changed...I only hope for good.*S*


 The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship."

--Ralph Waldo Emerson


SEA
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7 posted 2000-04-12 01:24 PM


Dhuron~ this is so beautiful, heart's melody is an excellent theme. -SEA
dhuron
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8 posted 2000-04-12 09:48 PM


Thank you SEA, I am glad you liked it
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