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Where's It All Gone? |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
I'm waiting for my heart to pour out All that's inside of me My feelings released on paper Coming out in poetry I'm waiting, it's just not coming I think I'll go and wait for inspiration to hit But all the flowers have died, The heart beat of man has already started to wilt No pouring out of true feeling No inspiration in sight Is writing a growing struggle also in my life? I don't want to think about it I'm not satisfied with, with... things anymore. Call it fustration, lost will, Call it what ye may I'm just not feeling it inside me And that's where I need it to be. Ah well.... Thanks for reading. I've been gone for awhile. It's good to be back. I think I'll go read some posts of all you wonderful poets now. Yours, Joy |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
It’s still inside and here’s proof love it Joel. |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Joy, it's so good to have you back. Excellent poem you return with as well. You have been dearly missed.  michael |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
excellent poem joy...and excellent to have you posting as well. very well expressed emotions in this... writers block is a CURSE for sure. take care, jm The stars shine so bright, now's the time I close my eyes - soft wind touch my face, Cool sand upon the place where I once kissed you And held you close. Now I will reach for the stars... Because Oh my love, that's where you are... Though the storms of black night rage on I still see your face I still feel your lips on mine And though my heart feels all alone without you I still hear you sing to me I still hear your voice on the sea... vertical horizon |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
Thank you Joel, Michael, and Janet Marie. Writer's block fustrates me more than anything! Thanks again for reading. Joy [This message has been edited by JOY 14 (edited 04-09-2000).] |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Thank you so much Joy. You have a way with your writing, that is intriguing. and very inspiring, I’m new at all this, having been repressed for so many years by another, this is the best I have felt in a long time. Thank you again Joel. |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
Joel, You are very welcome my friend!  I am glad you are feeling good once again. And just from your comments I feel very good too! So thank you! Joy |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
I've asked the same question... wonderful work Joy A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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baerlon Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 197Youngstown and East Liverpool, Ohio, USA |
I feel this way to, the more i write the less satified i been feeling with it lately, The part where you mentioned about writing becoming a problem everyday like the rest has been a real thron lately in my life as well. I hope you get over it soon. There's a peace inside us all Let it be your friend It will help you carry on In the end There's a peace inside us all -Creed |
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