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Ian Llewellyn ap-Griffith
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since 2000-02-12
Posts 197
Cincinnati, Oh, U.S.A.

0 posted 2000-04-08 12:47 PM


Evolution

I stood outside upon the ledge
one hundred stories high
and looked out over the sea of the city
with its undulating waves of people
and electric undercurrents
and the vastness of the deapths below
I longed for the water of life
the ocean rushing through my gills
with a last gasp of stagnant air
I dove in


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Ian Llewellyn ap-Griffith
Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 197
Cincinnati, Oh, U.S.A.
1 posted 2000-04-08 12:49 PM


I'm back!
I just got my own computer so you'll be seeing alot more of me here.
I can't wait to read and write poetry well into the wee hours!

dhuron
Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476

2 posted 2000-04-08 03:32 AM


Good that you are back*S*

Very good post you have here. Hope to read more.


Dhuron

 The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship."

--Ralph Waldo Emerson


StarrGazer
Senior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 679
Texas
3 posted 2000-04-08 03:43 AM


very good poem , I dont think I have had the pleasure of reading any of your posts before... but well written and I look forward to reading more
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