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Joel the wolf
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since 2000-04-06
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0 posted 2000-04-07 09:31 AM



God give me strength

For this night, is a lonely night,
I’m by myself, and I feel so alone.
God give me strength

Am I a lip print on a shirt, something to be wiped away with shame?
I have a heart, but it no longer beats in my chest, it has taken wing
God give me strength

I feel as though this is my last chance of happiness.
The voice of a desperate wolf cry, complete abyss.
God give me strength.

It seem’s a hallow life  that has taken me to this place,
From childhood to ?? a void manhood, a vacant chase.
God give me strength.

Never thought I’d end up like this.
like a puddle in the street excrement never missed.
God give me strength

I’m so tired and I’m so alone.
my heart breaks, have been shone
God give me strength

Again Tonight.

 

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SEA
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1 posted 2000-04-07 09:35 AM


Oh Joel.... God will give you the strength.... open your heart to his love...this was beautiful and so very sad. I'm sorry for your aching heart.-SEA
Joel the wolf
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
2 posted 2000-04-07 09:59 AM


Thank you Sea, I had abandoned all, I was close, if you know what I mean
and now fighting my way back up.
Thank you again. Your warmth has touch my heart.
Joel.
It's 6:30 pst. going to work again.
looking for a rainbow with a doves flight.

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

3 posted 2000-04-07 11:02 AM


I was so inspired by these words, but I couldn't do it justice!
It was as if strength was seeping away and reading the words made me realize how much I really need the poetry. thanks!

Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
4 posted 2000-04-08 06:43 PM


Oh it is an echo of prayers I myself have uttered.  I know the pain, the emptiness, well written!!  

 There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



JOY 14
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since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA
5 posted 2000-04-09 12:20 PM


Joel,
Strength enough to write of your pain here.  Keep praying.  

You are another one who sneaked in without my knowing.  Already you have so many poems.  So keep posting them.  I'll do my best to reply to the new ones if I don't catch the old.  

Joy

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