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baerlon
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since 2000-01-14
Posts 197
Youngstown and East Liverpool, Ohio, USA

0 posted 2000-04-07 12:18 PM


I am writing this one out of curiosity, I am intersted in what my fellow peots think of letting the child in your heart live and thrive.  Or even if you think it should be tucked away and left aside.  So i guess what i am asking if you feel so to do is to write a poem on the matter and post it.  If not that is fine i am just curious.


The Child

Reality says I have to be “Mature,” grown up
Yet as the rain falls the child inside my heart smiles
The puddle on the walk way calls to my weary soul
“Maturity” would require me to walk around
Yet the child in my heart says to jump
One puddle after another my soul splashes the water of life
The “Mature” stare and condemn with the other “Mature”
Yet in their hearts they are jealous
My sanity is intact, though trials, tribulations … life
The “Mature” heart lies sad, tired … cold
My child weeps for them yet can do nothing
If it were to, I would become an example, “Mature “
So I continue … walking, splashing  …
Letting the child in my heart heal my weary soul



 There's a peace inside us all
Let it be your friend
It will help you carry on
In the end
There's a peace inside us all
-Creed

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Sven
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Posts 14937
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1 posted 2000-04-07 12:26 PM


Barelon,

my inner child says "JUMP!"
My Outer Adult Says "walk!"
my inner child says "RUN!!"
My Outer Adult Says "walk!"

my inner child says "JELLO!!"
My Outer Adult Says "bran!!"
my inner child says "CANDY!!"
My Outer Adult Says "oats!!"

Who do you think that I'm going to listen to?

Let your child live!!!!  It's all we can do to keep SANE!!!!!  Let the "Mature" people stare and wonder, because you know that if they could, they'd be right there with you!!!

Excellent poem my childish friend, and that's a compliment!!

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Joel the wolf
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
2 posted 2000-04-07 01:48 AM


At 8 I played tag,
with my best friend dog shag.

At 10 I kissed a girl,
at 12 I found the world.

At 13 I danced moon river,
at 15 I fell in love with a
girl that made me shiver.

At 21 I had the world by the tail,
At 31 I thought I had failed.
At 45 I lived in a bag,
At 50 I once again played Tag.

Are we not all true children of the heart?

baerlon
Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 197
Youngstown and East Liverpool, Ohio, USA
3 posted 2000-04-07 03:06 AM


Yes nicely put both of you. The child drives myself and it is nice to know it does others as well.
JOY 14
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since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA
4 posted 2000-04-08 11:39 PM


Oh my gosh!  Baerlon, I wrote and posted a poem about the child within my heart dying, a real long while ago here.  Feel free to check it out if you want. I think the title was Wilted Wildflowers  

Joy

[This message has been edited by JOY 14 (edited 04-08-2000).]

tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
5 posted 2000-04-08 11:49 PM


Oh my god, this is exactly how I feel most of the time, my daughter thinks I'm crazy and is forever telling me to act like a "mum", But I just love acting like a kid and I think it keeps me feeling younger and healthier ????
I'll set my muse to work and see what I can come up with
Tracie~


 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks


baerlon
Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 197
Youngstown and East Liverpool, Ohio, USA
6 posted 2000-04-10 02:46 AM


He he, I will have to look that one up Joy and read it.  Also does it feel not great when someone sayes that to you Tracie?  I will look forward to reading yours whenit is done.  Thank you both for the reply.

 There's a peace inside us all
Let it be your friend
It will help you carry on
In the end
There's a peace inside us all
-Creed

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