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Isis
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since 1999-09-06
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0 posted 2000-04-06 10:09 PM


The stars were aligned the night I was born,
And that is usually bad in a cosmic way,
So maybe that is why my life is ebbing,
For I was born to pay.

I find my shreds of happiness,
And someone always does their darndest to take it away,
I love who and what I've become,
But sometimes secretly still doubt it at the start of each new day.

I love my friends and family,
But must admit I nuture a fear,
That they don't love me as I love them,
Out of sight, out of mind, when I'm not near.

Will I always feel this inadequacy?
Is this a normal thing to feel?
Or I am merely overexagerating?
Imagining things that aren't real?

As my life rolls on,
I know one day I'll find my answers,
I'll keeping hoping and praying,
That true peace will come my way.

That friends and family,
Indeed mean what they say,
That my doubts and insecurities,
Will finally fade away..............



 There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



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Sven
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1 posted 2000-04-07 12:18 PM


What if we didn't have these things Isis?  I know that life itself would indeed be much more wonderful. . .

Know that you do not fight alone, but one day, we will win. . .

Excellent poem. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Isis
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since 1999-09-06
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Sunny Queensland
2 posted 2000-04-07 12:44 PM


I hope so Sven, I really do....

 There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



Joel the wolf
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since 2000-04-06
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Angels Camp
3 posted 2000-04-07 01:28 AM


Isis even when out of sight you will never be forgotten, I can see you are a shining light
in this darkened world, keep up your good work and insight.
Joel.

Isis
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since 1999-09-06
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4 posted 2000-04-07 01:36 AM


Why thankyou Joel!!  And welcome, welcome, welcome.  You've already made a friend here, ME!!  

 There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



Dark_kisses_Within
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since 2000-03-21
Posts 680
Kansas
5 posted 2000-04-07 03:22 AM


Very nice poem Isis!!  Others always tell me if we fight for what we really want, we can have it.  I havent yet seen that to be true.  But I am hopeful.  Never lose touch and keep taking those 2 steps forward, even if you have to take 1 step back.  A little progress is better than none at all.

Peace
Dark_kisses_within


 I do not love you for being perfect.....
I love you for being perfect for me!!

AVANTI
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since 2000-02-02
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INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE
6 posted 2000-04-07 04:30 AM


The stars were definately aligned to welcome
you...
SO well written...you pick your words well
wonderful poem...I'm wondering...if it'll fade for me too


 If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves
from which evolves the light...
Avanti Rao

SEA
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with you
7 posted 2000-04-07 04:14 PM


Isis~ Insecurity and self doubt will only hold you back.... you are far too wonderful of a soul to worry of such things.......  -SEA
Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
8 posted 2000-04-07 07:03 PM


Sea thanks so much.  
Avanti if it hasn't already happened I doubt it will, sometimes I am quite insecure!!  
Thanks everyone  

 There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



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