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An Angel's Sigh
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An Angel's Sigh |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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We were brought together by an Angel's sigh to love each other untill we die In my soul, from the very start you held the key that fit my heart No other love than me for you No other love would ever do Our love is endless as mighty as the sea by an Angel's sigh ~each other's destiny~ -SEA- *ok, so it isn't dark......  |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
I’m glad it wasn’t so dark, involving Angels. My love now is an angle, and she like your poem drives me to new heights. Thank you. Joel. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Not everything in here has to be dark. Sea this was so beautiful, and I'm so happy you have this wonderous gift of love in your life!!  There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
this was very wonderful! Kathleen |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
this was a very romantic piece, and made me think of angels differently Kathleen |
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Night Chica Junior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 39Vermont |
I have to say that that poem was beautiful. The emotion that I can sense (as well as relate to since it reminds me of the current relationship I am in) really makes this poem come to life. "In my soul, from the very start you held the key that fit my heart No other love than me for you No other love would ever do" These lines especially were the ones I could identify with. It's nice to see something that uplifts the spirit in this section as well.  Megs I was never one to patiently pick up broken fragments and glue them together again and tell myself that the mended whole was as good as new. What is broken is broken- and I'd rather remember it as it was at its best than mend it and see the broken places as long as I lived. -- Margaret Mitchell |
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StarrGazer Senior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 679Texas |
I have to agree that it is nice to read some uplifitng pieces in here and the imagery an angel's sigh invokes is great beautiful poem good job Mystical being which makes ink flow Surround me in your incandescent glow Fill my brain with thoughts and rhyme As I try to capture but a moment in time ~Shan~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This is very lovely. James |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Joel~ thanks, I'm really glad you liked this. Isis~ I wrote it about Jon, My hubby. He is the greatest love I've ever known!Irish Rose~ (beautiful name) thanks so much! Night Chica~ ( great name) I'm happy you could identify with it! Starr~ thank you, I have a thing about Angel's.... ( happy thoughts) James~ I'm glad you liked this -SEA |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
VERY NICE SEA!!! love this poem... very pretty poem...and we love SEAing this side of you  hope floats ... right (smile) take care, jm The stars shine so bright, now's the time I close my eyes - soft wind touch my face, Cool sand upon the place where I once kissed you And held you close. Now I will reach for the stars... Because Oh my love, that's where you are... Though the storms of black night rage on I still see your face I still feel your lips on mine And though my heart feels all alone without you I still hear you sing to me I still hear your voice on the sea... vertical horizon |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Sea~ this is just devine, a lovely piece Tracie~ Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Remarkable poem, SEA. This one touched me deeply. Michael |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SO ...... here you are ! I have missed you ! This is a lovely piece. Uplifting and sweet. Drop me a note, gal ! I miss you in Open ! Can't you drop in for a visit ? Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Janet~ I love your poems, I'm glad you liked this Tracie~ thanks!! Michael~Wow,that's really sweet, I'm touched you liked it! Marge~ Hi sweetie!! Glad to see you in the Dark. I'll come over to Open tomorrow,ok?Glad you liked this -SEA |
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Caitlin Junior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 15 |
I'm glad you not only have such a love in your life but that you are able to express it so deeply. Very lovely work |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
short and still beautiful... well written... I love the topic... An angel's sigh... If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
short and still beautiful... well written... I love the topic... An angel's sigh... If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao |
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NamelessOne Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 197Biloxi MS |
A beautiful affirmation of your love ,thanks for sharing |
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