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TanAngel
Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 168
Oviedo, Florida, USA

0 posted 2000-04-04 05:16 PM


Attention:
As everyone should know I was gone for a while...in that time I wrote a lot of new stuff...but the problem is...I left so I could speak exactly what I felt...and that wasn't okay b/c I couldn't share some of that with everybody...but anyway I pulled myself together and now I am perfectly peachy in every way! I hope you missed me and...TA has returned! So here is my coming home poem...

I step off the plane into your arms

One look around shows you havn't moved far

Perfectly happy in every way...I have looked forward to this day...this day I come home

As I go on...farther into this place...I relize everything has changed...

I have only been gone for a while

You met new friends...lost touch with old ones

No more loving each day to the fullest...you changed...I don't know you anymore

Your love for life drained like the clouds after a downpour...but so unlike them...I am not sure if you will refill...

So stay forever you...never grasp the fateful death of changing...



After Note: I know that was really stupid and pathetic...trust me not one of my better works...but thats okay...thank-u those who replied to my leaving...when I got back...it was still on the board! Thank-u SOO much...it meant a lot to me to know that I had so many fans...readers...


 "Sheltered from the world you scare yourself from the rain...away from the dark sickning fog that so stumblest unto your heart...for no true poet holds loves hand..."-TanAngel

© Copyright 2000 Jessica Farrell - All Rights Reserved
JOY 14
Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA
1 posted 2000-04-04 06:21 PM


Welcome back TanAngel.  I take it you had a good vacation.     Btw, this wasn't stupid at all!  Okay?  

Joy

Hope, tears, and renewal
Member
since 2000-03-27
Posts 74

2 posted 2000-04-04 08:20 PM


Welcome back.  And no, it wasn't stupid and pathetic.  It was great.  And besides, it came from the heart.  And nothing that comes from the heart is stupid... or pathetic.
ShadowHeart
Junior Member
since 2000-03-25
Posts 49

3 posted 2000-04-04 09:13 PM


Although I can't really say it, WELCOME BACK! Great poem...despite what u think.

luv ya, shadow


 Love is our greatest weakness
but when it's found,
it's our greatest strength.

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