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Heartache |
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Virgo Junior Member
since 2000-03-27
Posts 46tx |
Will I be able to endure the pain? Not having him next to me... Will I start going insane? Not feeling his beautiful heartbeat?! Not feeling his body next to mine Not having him in my arms Not seeing our bodies entwined Not being a part of his perfect charm His luscious lips caressing my own His hands encircling my hair Such beautiful memories... Are too much to bear How will I be able to live... without this perfect man what a cruel life to live... to be dealt with such a hand. |
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TanAngel Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 168Oviedo, Florida, USA |
Beautiful...and so expressive...you will be able to endure...just look deep inside to the gallent you inside... "Sheltered from the world you scare yourself from the rain...away from the dark sickning fog that so stumblest unto your heart...for no true poet holds loves hand..."-TanAngel |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
Virgo, Wonderful Poem You will endure, fate doesn't deal us anything that we can not handle. Just have to look deep within yourself and you will find the strength. The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship." --Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice writing Virgo...heartache and heartbreak...two words that deliver terror and sorrow into sad and brokenhearts. James |
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Virgo Junior Member
since 2000-03-27
Posts 46tx |
thank you all for your words of encouragement it's always good to know that there are people that understand what I am feeling... |
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just_another_fe Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 483MICHIGAN |
Good poem. I agree withthese guyz  you can do it |
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HelenaJ Member
since 2000-04-04
Posts 81Kitchener, ont. Canada |
That was a beautiful piece. A broken heart is the hardest pain to bear, but there is always a cure. Until you find yours. ~hug~ |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
how beautifully touching Kathleen |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Turning the he into a she for me, I feel this all too much. Joel. |
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