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Zunera
Junior Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 30
Pakistan

0 posted 2000-04-04 03:41 AM



Eyes ---- Her Eyes filled with Love,
her passion for love,
the affection in love,
a triviliant sight of un-noticed love,
the unmatched ecstacy,
and the unlimited fantasy,
Both for the Love and the Beloved,
Her Eyes ---- filled with enthusiasm,
and countless breaths of satisfaction,
the determination,
the admiration,
the fervent sophistication,
the flamboyant expression,
in the depths of waters of Love,
She Smiled !!!
Her Eyes ---- filled with unlaughed, unheard, and unseen laughter,
it was all in her eyes; ............
.....that.....
she SMILED !!!

Those blinking Eyes; searching for miles,
found thee............
she SMILED !!!
..and gently dropped the 'lids; her eyelids;
she continued to smile,
and closed
the glitering view unto the secret is not shown,
to ye' and me;
and still,
it all disclosed with a single smile;
....as
SHE SMILED !!!!!


 

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Dark_kisses_Within
Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680
Kansas
1 posted 2000-04-04 09:27 AM


Nice poem!  Very simple and to the point always works for me.  )  Yet it is so true how the eyes can tell everything about a person.  Looking into the eyes can let others know the pain, the happiness, and even the loneliness they feel.  
Thanx for sharing that!

Peace
Dark_kisses_Within


 I do not love you for being perfect.....
I love you for being perfect for me!!

AVANTI
Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664
INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE
2 posted 2000-04-04 04:05 PM


very sweet poem...
true feelings...i presume...
well done!


 If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves
from which evolves the light...
Avanti Rao

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2000-04-05 03:33 AM


I can dig it...I enjoyed readling this.  James
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