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LeeSabina Junior Member
since 2000-04-02
Posts 10 |
I took this heart of mine I released it to the air the words you said were all the same I heard how you don't care But I watched and I saw your eyes keeping careful vigil making sure my heart does not hit the ground your hand reaches out at the very last moment you make the save I breathe a sigh of relief |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Certainly nice to have someone there who catches your heart when you're not sure they will. Too often, mine has went SPLAT!!! LOL Good poem. Michael |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Nice work here. I agree with Michael on the "SPLAT" part! lol Knowing someone is there to catch ur heart causing little or no pain would be nice. Cherish that. Peace Dark_kisses_Within I do not love you for being perfect..... I love you for being perfect for me!! |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
i liked this very much. lol at the splat! it seems like the begining of a relationship is about holding your breath until you realize that it is real and safe. then comes the relief. there's nothing like it. very well done! |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
great poem. I go with the "splat"...too many times... Well done The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship." --Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
this is very touching,and I know our words are as important as our hearts! Kathleen |
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