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Zunera
Junior Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 30
Pakistan

0 posted 2000-04-03 04:00 PM



Walking down the road to Nowhere,
Thinking of people we've lost somewhere,
Searching for the adieus,
Screaming of the Agony,
Melting like snow,
Burning like candle,
We are treading on our feelings!
Those hidden inside us;
We are treading on our feelings !!!!

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sports2girl
Junior Member
since 2000-03-31
Posts 14

1 posted 2000-04-03 04:46 PM


Very good poem. It shoiws direction. i feel the same way. Good JOB  
Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
2 posted 2000-04-03 08:21 PM


I know what you mean!!  But I try not to step on my feelings or any one else's for that matter!!    Good work  

 There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



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