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LeeSabina
Junior Member
since 2000-04-02
Posts 10


0 posted 2000-04-02 09:36 PM



I've read all your works
At least one from each
My heart felt quite heard
I was absent from speech

All of you feel
and write with such depth
I'm almost afraid
to let go this breath

It seems quite clear
and I'm relieved to find
that so many out there
are of the same mind

I thought I was different
I thought I was strange
to feel such emotions
now I know I am sane

You all are so beautiful
your hearts are so pure
and now that I've found you
I'll be back for more
        - LeeSabina -

© Copyright 2000 LeeSabina - All Rights Reserved
Dawn Eclipse
Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637
The Horsehead Nebula
1 posted 2000-04-02 10:05 PM


That was a wonderful poem... thank you so much for sharing your gift with us all.   I hope to see more from you.


 Sometimes the most important things can't be seen with the eyes, but are rather felt with the heart.
*Cassie Roseen*



dhuron
Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476

2 posted 2000-04-02 10:12 PM


Welcome to Passions LeeSabina,

Great first post.  Glad to hear you'll return.  

 The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship."

--Ralph Waldo Emerson


just_another_fe
Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 483
MICHIGAN
3 posted 2000-04-02 10:39 PM


~Lee
Welcome to passions   I use to think i was alone to. Thanx for the words ((hugz)) the people here are great. I'm looking forward to reading more of your stuff.
~Angie


[This message has been edited by just_another_fe (edited 04-02-2000).]

Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
4 posted 2000-04-03 01:00 AM


Welcome! Welcome!!  What a lovely poem to let us know what you think of us and passions!!  Passions is great for sharing thoughts and feelings and problems.  We are indeed that caring family of friends.
Off to read your 2nd post!!  

 There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



Jannel
Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492
Muncie, IN, USA
5 posted 2000-04-03 01:03 AM


why, thank you my dear! and welcome, we love finding those of the same heart.
jann elizabeth

 Love is so short, and forgetting so long.
-Pablo Neruda

ZuMBLe
Junior Member
since 2000-03-27
Posts 33

6 posted 2000-04-03 03:06 AM


I too thought that I was the only one.  Until I started reading other people's poems.. And they described how I felt.. Feelings and problems that I thought only I had.. No, you're not alone... A majority of the world just doesn't express themselves.. =)


Virgo
Junior Member
since 2000-03-27
Posts 46
tx
7 posted 2000-04-03 11:58 AM


Thank you for including us in your thoughts...welcome to DP.
JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
8 posted 2000-04-03 04:21 PM


I liked the flow and sincerity.   James
JOY 14
Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA
9 posted 2000-04-04 06:26 PM


I hope you come back
You are most welcome here
Strange is how some may describe
Someone great
But someone they just don't understand
We'll try to get
Whatever you say
For you are certainly right
Here
Poets' souls unite!

Joy

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