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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
Standing in the middle of the ruin you caused Hearing the Cries Feeling the Screeching of souls Enough! No more, You shall not Hurt anyone Else As the Ominous clouds choke the sun, my Desire for Retribution Fills my being In the bleak Darkness, The Promise is made. You will pay... oh you will pay dearly Be Warned, My mind, heart, and Soul Have taken up Arms ready for Battle Your Fate, Your Demise Are in My hands now The Day is near So very near..... |
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just_another_fe Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 483MICHIGAN |
dhuron~ oOoOoOo get em.  Good poem.I'm glad that you finally said enough is enough.Good Luck ~Angie |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Great Poem!!! Fighting back is something I havent accomplished yet. But this poem shows me it is possible! Thanks Peace I do not love you for being perfect..... I love you for being perfect for me!! |
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Jannel Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492Muncie, IN, USA |
i loved the formattting and the choice of word capitalization. oh, and the strength. wow. excellent work. jann elizabeth Love is so short, and forgetting so long. -Pablo Neruda |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
I'll go with Jannell on this one, great work Daniel  There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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