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JOY 14
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since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA

0 posted 2000-04-02 01:15 PM


No longer do I want
to live in the dark
These walls I must break down
to see
The light is changing on every living thing
that I can't even see
Dungen
Confining
Cannot see even my hands
That wipe away my tears
I want to break out of the dark
Tear down these brick walls
that hold me prisoner
Destroy what is holding me back
Let the sun flood my eyes
Let my body rise
Stretching my fingers to the sky
No longer can I wait
For the light to find me
No longer do I want to live in the dark
At last I'm free
Strings are pulling
I won't though, this time,
I won't let myself be pulled!
This time I AM free
I won't go back into the dark!



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dhuron
Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476

1 posted 2000-04-02 01:57 PM


Great Job here.

I am glad you broke from the dark prision and won't go back. Thrive in the light.


Dark_kisses_Within
Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680
Kansas
2 posted 2000-04-02 02:59 PM


Joy.... I think we all feel and want this at one time in our lives.  You did an excellent job expressing ur wants and needs.  Stand strong and proud and soon it will happen for you

Peace


 I do not love you for being perfect.....
I love you for being perfect for me!!

Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
3 posted 2000-04-02 07:58 PM


Lovely work Joy!  It reminds me of a movie line..  I'll give it to you and you see if you know the movie...
'Go to the light!'
'There is peace and tranquility in the light...'
Name the movie?  

 There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



JOY 14
Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA
4 posted 2000-04-02 09:38 PM


Thanks for your replies.  Isis, it's Poltergeist right?  

Joy

Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
5 posted 2000-04-03 01:21 AM


Very Good!!  Game over    Couldn't resist doing that, glad you played and didn't just think I was stupid!!!  

 There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



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