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dhuron
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0 posted 2000-04-02 01:45 AM


Just a Snake,
Sitting, waiting
to infect me with
your Virulence

Alluring
Loving
Caring
Friendly

Sitting, just waiting
for the time to
Strike, Evil
You are

I see you,
for what you are
No longer Can you
Hide behind that pleasing body

Ruined so many,
I was your next
victim, naive
Vulnerable

Clinched Fists
I see you slithering
On the Ground
Anger and hate

All problems solved
When A single Action
Fate handing the Snake it’s retribution
SQUISH!

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1 posted 2000-04-02 03:41 AM


Very wicked poem indeed my fellow poet. You have been hurt or is this the train of thought you were on while writing this poem?



 Ronil (the one and lonely)

dhuron
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2 posted 2000-04-02 04:48 AM


This is about someone who has vexed me beyond end.  Writing this has vent most if not all the anger....

Thanks for reading

LeeSabina
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3 posted 2000-04-03 09:25 PM


Oouch! I hope she felt it!Good for you!
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