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Xeonox
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0 posted 04-02-2000 01:38 AM       View Profile for Xeonox   Email Xeonox   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Xeonox

God gave me a little joy,
a little hope,
God gave me you,
You came in my life,
gave rebirth to joy, to laughter and to trust,
My heart was a cold place without you,
It was a place where lost souls once came,
It was place to nowhere,
As you stepped in my heart,
Flowers blossomed again,
The rain of love began to drop,
My soul awoken,
I was unchained from nightmares and mirages,
I was again the handsome man I once was,
Now I am full of love and energy,
You gave me hope, which I have never seen,
Your beauty made the goddesses rethink about themselves,
You are so full of love,
just the thought of you makes me cry,
I was crying at the thought of how you blessed me,
You show me the light and restored my trust,
When you talk to me, it was like talking to god,
Heaven is on earth when I talk to you,
Just saying Hi to you makes my whole day better,
It gives me a new hope to rethink my whole life,
It turn me upside down; it makes me want to live again,
No matter how cruel the world had been, you showed me the way to forgiveness,
I had put up barriers so I could not be crushed again,
but the thought of you melted them,
You gave me the sense of protection,
You were my shelter when I was scared and lost,
You gave me a place in your heart,
which I will cherish forever,
You are the woman I want to marry,
you are the one?.



 Ronil (the one and lonely)
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1 posted 04-02-2000 01:51 AM       View Profile for dhuron   Email dhuron   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit dhuron's Home Page   View IP for dhuron

Xeonox,

  Wonderful heartfelt Poem. I am glad you found one that has touched your heart in such a way.  Best Wishes.



 The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship."

--Ralph Waldo Emerson

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2 posted 04-02-2000 03:11 AM       View Profile for Xeonox   Email Xeonox   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Xeonox

I have not found the right one ,that is why I have a question mark at the end and it is labeled Future Wife.

 Ronil (the one and lonely)
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Lovely thoughts nicely expressed.   James
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Wow.  I am amazed..this is an incredible poem.  I really do feel you in this one.  It may sound nuts, but I believe a mad, crazy love really does exist..a love that is beyond what anyone could imagine, one that the world can't come between.  People are so scared to be alone that they settle for less too soon and never get to experience it...that is sad.  I'd rather be alone a while than settle for "second best"...I really do love this poem! p.s....light blue eyes and I can cook....haha

You can never have too much fiction; reality can be such a bore

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