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a varied Shakespearean sonnet
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a varied Shakespearean sonnet |
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Lily B Member
since 2000-03-31
Posts 91Auburn, IN, US 
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'My Unanswerable Question' © by Lily B Of Death and beyond I oft obsess And query all who’d lend an ear Beliefs on Heav’n and saving Grace Bestowed upon our loved ones dear. Upon my sister’s self-demise I fretted where her soul may land, For angry gods no doubt despise A mortal’s death by her own hand! Yet, would not those whose minds belied Their common sense and means to cope Be spared the judgement set aside For those with reason, wit and hope? Lo! Until the passing of mine own last breath, I’ll continue to ponder the mechanics of Death. (a varied Shakespearean sonnet) |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Lilly~ Welcome!  Wow! This is beautiful, sad topic, but written sooooo well! -SEA |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
Welcome Lily, Wonderfully written sonnet. Sad but excellent. Good to have you here. The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship." --Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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Aiden Kelly Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 148Ft. Wayne, IN USA |
Welcome to Passions! awesome poem! i admire anyone who has the talent to write sonnets! thoughtful contemplations concerning suicide...very interesting...i love the way you've written this! looking forward to more! |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
Welcome to the forum that has more light that you can imagine... that's a beautifully written sonnet... it's truly...well done... If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Really good writing Lily...James |
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Jannel Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492Muncie, IN, USA |
beautiful and sad. i loved the sonnet form. welcome to passions!! jann elizabeth Love is so short, and forgetting so long. -Pablo Neruda |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Great writing alright, and sad  Welcome to Passions  There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Lily B Member
since 2000-03-31
Posts 91Auburn, IN, US |
THANK YOU all sincerely for your encouraging words! I'm glad to be a new community member and anxious to get to know all of you... ~Julie (a.k.a. "Lily B") |
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