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just_another_fe
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0 posted 2000-03-30 04:19 PM


It's dark in this forum.
I look but I can't see.
I yell "helloooooooo"
where could they all be?
I feel along
this long straight wall
hoping that something dont get in my way
making me fall.
I see something as I stare
I think that i've just found a chair.
I'll sit and wait for everyone to come
Then our feeling we can all share.
As i go to sit down
I plop in the velvet chair.
I scream OMG!!!!!
someones already sitting there!!
Now i'm scared
but he says don't be
"it's ok hun
sit here next to me"
I think we need some light in here
it's to dark for me
I'll plug in my snoopy night light
so we can all see.
The room kind of lights up
and i look around to see
whos all here?
whos this guy next to me?
i got an idea guys
would you like to hear?
they are playing a game in poetry challenge.
poetry ping pong,you wanna play that game here?
If you wanna play
thats all you gotta say.
if you don't want to
then thats ok.
we can just sit and talk
its up to you.
so my friends in Dark Passions
what shall we do?



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1 posted 2000-03-30 05:22 PM


Great poem...very cute.  

          Yours truly,
             Angel


 "The dark weight of the hour
humming madly
filling my head
with blood
and sorrow
and dread
the executioner's song."
-Jewel
"The Dark Bells"

~*Angel of Darkness*~



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with you
2 posted 2000-03-30 05:24 PM


J_A_F~ this is FUN! I really like this! We all come into the Dark and seek comfort among friends. -SEA
just_another_fe
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3 posted 2000-04-01 07:54 PM


Thanks you two. I actually did wanna play poetry ping pong in here but with only two replys it would be a fast game lol
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