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just_another_fe
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since 2000-02-05
Posts 483
MICHIGAN

0 posted 2000-03-30 03:36 PM


I told you everything
about me and him
I told you things
from deep within
Things with you
i only shared
and stupid me
i thought u cared
I told you things
he said when we talked
I cried to you
when we fought
i told you
how i felt inside
i told you
all the reasons i cried
you said you didnt want to hurt me
so you lied
if your only friends
tell me.......whats there to hide?
"is there really a you and him"
thats what you said
"or is it your imagination Ang"
is what i read
how could you not believe
all that i have said
do you really think
this is all in my head?
that one sentence
is all you needed to say
now i see you
the real way
Another "friend"
i thought i had
Another "friendship"
gone bad.....how sad

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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676
with you
1 posted 2000-03-30 05:34 PM


J_A_F~ I'm sorry your "friend" let you down so bad..... I have been in your shoes. She isn't my friend any more. No one needs a friend like that.-SEA
Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
2 posted 2000-03-30 06:07 PM


As life rolls on you soon discover the 'real' friends and the 'fake' ones.  Real friends are diamonds, fake ones are cubic zirconia's.  Sometimes it takes a while to sort them out, but it is worth the effort, for in the end you have the true gems.  I have a wonderful old friend of 30 years now, she only rings or comes round when she has a problem, when I have one she isn't even interested!!  
So sorry this happened to you, i know, it really hurts...
Wonderfully written  

 There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



Jannel
Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492
Muncie, IN, USA
3 posted 2000-03-30 06:32 PM


excellent work about betrayal. frindship is so wonderful when it's true but can hurt so bad when it is not.

jann elizabeth

 Love is so short, and forgetting so long.
-Pablo Neruda

just_another_fe
Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 483
MICHIGAN
4 posted 2000-04-01 07:52 PM


Thanx guyz it seems like i have found so many "friends" like this but very few of the real kind.

Sea- you are so right. At first I was looking at it as a big loss then i realized it was a gain. i had eliminated one more fake friend out of my life and she can't hurt me again

Isis- I agree i just wish there was more diamonds in this big bag of cubic zirconias   guess i'll keep sorting


Jannel- Thanx a lot yes it does hurt a lot but i guess its better that way   once there gone they cant hurt you anymore

~Angie

sports2girl
Junior Member
since 2000-03-31
Posts 14

5 posted 2000-04-01 08:40 PM


This is an excellent poem. I have ahd many friends like this and i thought i was the only one. Now i know i am not. Thanks for writing what i could never sya!!
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
6 posted 2000-04-02 08:19 AM


This is excellent writing..most people have lots of friends but only a few that they can totally trust and tell everything..I have some friends I can only tell a little bit about my personal life to and a few that I would tell anything and everything.  Jasmes
just_another_fe
Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 483
MICHIGAN
7 posted 2000-04-03 04:08 PM


Thanx for reading  

sports2girl: There are many of us.

James: for some reason i luv when you reply to my stuff. I think we got a lot in common like the things we go through/our feelings. I take what everyone says serious but I take what you say to heart. know what i mean? n e way thanx 4 responding.

Virgo
Junior Member
since 2000-03-27
Posts 46
tx
8 posted 2000-04-03 05:48 PM


I've been in the same situation...although it doesn't get any easier, it's always great to know who are your true friends.  Sometimes you're pleasantly surprised.
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