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dhuron
Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476


0 posted 2000-03-30 01:39 AM


Left,
again like before
alone, abandoned
forgotten

Why?
abandoned once
again; no one
to comfort me

Left by loved ones
Forgotten
Not wanted
Not good enough

Strong Appearance
Crying inside
Left Behind
Not good enough
Alone forever



 The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship."

--Ralph Waldo Emerson


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AVANTI
Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664
INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE
1 posted 2000-03-30 01:54 AM


short and expressive one...
i liked it


 you don't have to understand completely..to love completely...
remember even the darkest night has a morning to meet...you'll understand someday..Avanti Rao



Sandra Cox
Junior Member
since 2000-03-24
Posts 48
Essex, London,UK
2 posted 2000-03-30 01:29 PM


Powerful words.  Remember though, everyone is good enough!

Best Wishes

Sandra x

just_another_fe
Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 483
MICHIGAN
3 posted 2000-03-30 02:53 PM



dhuron~
expressive poem.
Everyone is put here
for a reason...the reason
is what we must find. You are
all you can be.I've felt this way
before. I think everyone has
at some point in time.You
are good enough..
everyone is
~Angie


Broken Wings
Member
since 2000-03-18
Posts 157
Miami, FL.
4 posted 2000-03-30 03:11 PM


Don't be trapped by the lies that you are not good enough...look inside and you will see a wonderful person that will be free.  


take care **HUG**
Broken Wings


 "As you learn and grow, you will realize the greater the pain, the greater the growth."
-IYANLA VANZANT


Dark Enchantress
Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258
meet Morgana
5 posted 2000-03-30 05:13 PM


Well done dhuron...but your never truly alone. There is always someone willing to listen...you just have to look for them. I understand your feelings though. Just stay true to yourself but open-minded aswell...what you truly need will come to you when the time is right.

                 Yours truly,
                    Angel


 "The dark weight of the hour
humming madly
filling my head
with blood
and sorrow
and dread
the executioner's song."
-Jewel
"The Dark Bells"

~*Angel of Darkness*~



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