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Isis
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Sunny Queensland

0 posted 2000-03-30 12:11 PM


Hurt and alone in this cold old house,
Staring at the candle's flame,
I seem to be staring a lot lately,
Don't want to look at reality or say it's name.

Dreams how I love them,
A short reprieve from this earthbound misery,
In my dreams I've fulfilled my true destiny,
In my dreams everyone loves and respects me.

Fleeting moments of happiness,
All too soon they pass away,
Just like my emotions, they too have passed over,
No happiness for me this day.

Fate brought me here, and now I have to wonder why,
I can't mend these problems,
No matter how I try,
Again coldness and darkness descends.

I live surrounded by beauty,
But so often others fail to see,
The depths of despair,
That now are a part of me.

I stare at the painting,
Of my forefather's land,
How I long to be there,
And then just a short walk to the sand.

I stare at the TV,
Not really watching what is on,
Stare at my son,
And I pray to God he'll not feel this way.

My stomach tightens again,
The usual stressed symptoms,
Even my body longing to be free,
Of this subexistance forced upon me.

All good things come to those who wait,
Those true of heart, who never hate,
So I sit or lie here passing the time,
Realizing my life is only a mime...
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 There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)




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Michael
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1 posted 2000-03-30 12:15 PM


I've felt like quite the mime of late too, Isis.  Excellent poem - though I ain't one to wait too long for anything...LOL  


Michael

Isis
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since 1999-09-06
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2 posted 2000-03-30 12:18 PM


Thanks Michael    First time we bumped into each other in ages!!  

 There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



Sven
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3 posted 2000-03-30 12:30 PM


All good things come to those who wait,
Those true of heart, who never hate,

That they do Isis. . . but, as I've heard before. . . the questions come in our time, but the answers. . .they come in God's time. . .

Excellent work my friend. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


danni
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since 1999-11-20
Posts 688
wisconsin
4 posted 2000-03-30 01:03 AM


indeed an excellent piece isis-and i think sven said it best about the whole questions and answers thing.
Sandra Cox
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since 2000-03-24
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Essex, London,UK
5 posted 2000-03-30 03:49 AM


Good piece Isis, very true that dreams are easy to be happy in but the reality is not so wonderful!

Sandra x

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