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Angel Usagi Junior Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 11 |
The pain inside me burns. It burns with a yearning... a sadness. I try to convince myself that it's gone... that the wanting is gone... But it's not. I wake up each day... trying to forget him... trying to forget his face... everything about him. But I can't. My love for him still burns... but he will never love me back. Why do I still love him? Why do I torture myself? These questions are unanswered. Loving him just creates pain... but I still love him... And the pain inside is still there. [This message has been edited by Angel Usagi (edited 03-31-2000).] |
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~Venus~ Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 128 |
Konnichi wa, Angel Usagi-chan. I know how you feel...my heart also burned with love for that one...that one *I thought* I loved... ~goddess of love, passion, and desire~ I'll be here...why? I'll be waiting...for what? 'll be waiting for you so...if you come here, you'll find me... I promise. |
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just_another_fe Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 483MICHIGAN |
Angel Usagi~ Did you write this poem about me? Do I know you? lol This i know very very well.IT SUCKS! not the poem the feelings in it. the poem is great. It seems like the more I try forgeting "him" the more i luv "him". Maybe some day we will both get our "him" lets cross our fingers. good luck  ~Angie [This message has been edited by just_another_fe (edited 03-29-2000).] |
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CrEaTuRe Member
since 2000-01-01
Posts 260Kuala Lumpur,Malaysia |
it's hard to forget so don't just remember that what you had was special while it lasted but life has to go on EVEN if he is not beside you along the way ..... i know it hurts to think of him but dear i guess if you still have any love for him... try going on with life as normal as you can ... and you'll be fine  take care |
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Sandra Cox Junior Member
since 2000-03-24
Posts 48Essex, London,UK |
Great poem. I too ask myself every day 'Why do I still love him?' and 'Why do I torture myself?'. I wish I knew the answers to those questions, I guess we just have to live and learn. Best Wishes Sandra x |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
Perhaps it was true love for you, they say true love is eternal. Another one will come to you and love you just the same and this feeling will melt away. The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship." --Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Change the him to a her, and you got me. this is a great way to show it. Thank you. Joel. I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nicely written and I often ask myself the same thing. Why do I still love her? Because love is giving and enduring. Why do I torture myself? Because I don't want to let go of these feelings of love...but someday soon the pain will break my grip...pain has a way of getting our attention. James |
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