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Useless release |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
if i could bleed the pain away then i would make a thousand cuts and let it flow till there was no more but what would that do except leave me as empty as the pain if i could cry the sadness away then i would cry enough to fill the salty ocean with my bitter tears but there's only so many tears that can be cried before they fall dry; invisible while the sadness continually grows another useless release if i could explain the torment away then i would speak of it as freely as it fills me but how could i put words to something only felt and manifested in confusion to speak of such madness would surely damage another's thin veil of sanity i cannot so i will keep silent and hidden far away spinning in circles where the scenery never changes and the laughter of the demon jester never ceases |
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Broken Wings Member
since 2000-03-18
Posts 157Miami, FL. |
This is so very sad.....and even sadder cuz i understand these feelings all to well...it isn't good to stay silent with these feeling...sooner or later the bomb will explode and only bring more pain... **HUG** take care, Broken Wings "As you learn and grow, you will realize the greater the pain, the greater the growth." -IYANLA VANZANT |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Danni~ this is very sad. May your heart heal fast.-SEA |
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Tess Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 288Australia |
"bleed the pain away" how succinctly that expresses it..if only it was so easy to be over the pain of love "Love is the only drug you can take that will convince you each time that you've never had it before." ~author unknown~ |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
bw-these were old feelings that i only now put into words. things have been much better. thanks you so much for commenting and the hug.  sea-my heart has already begun to heal. thank you for your kind reply. tess-actually this is probably the first one that wasn't necessarily about love. although it may have played a small roll. thanks to you also for your comment. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A nice way to describe the pain and sorrow we all experience at one time or another..glad to read things are better. James |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
I love this danni...it really hit home for me. Although dark and sad...it was still beautiful and prefectly expressive of those feelings. Excellent Yours truly, Angel "The dark weight of the hour humming madly filling my head with blood and sorrow and dread the executioner's song." -Jewel "The Dark Bells" ~*Angel of Darkness*~ |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
thank you jmlee and angel, for your kind words. they are appreciated. |
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lostboy Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 275New Hampshire, USA |
Glad to see you still turning them out. Excellent writing dan. Hope all is well. |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
sad...painful...but beuatifully written... If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
Danni, I agree with AVANTI. So sad, but so good too. TC. Joy |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
lostboy- well my, my, my..... aren't you a sight for soar eyes. it is a treat to see you pop in here. everything is fine, thank you for asking. so, where's some of your work. i miss ya around here. anyway, thanks again for the comment. avanti and joy- that is exactly what the feelings were. and i am very glad to say that they are old feelings. i have actually been very happy as of late. many thanks to you both for your very kind comments. |
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