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morteZ
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since 2000-03-16
Posts 17


0 posted 2000-03-28 08:49 PM


I wish that my skin was see-through so that I could see the diseases within me become my destiny.
Fantasy into reality. To watch myself bresthe, then stop. How erotic it could all be.
The mirror is lying to me, I am not see-through.
Acid sings to me but I am not falling for it's lullaby. I don't need it anymore, and it sure don't need me. It's just kidding itself.
It's trying to enforce guilt, nice try.


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Jannel
Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492
Muncie, IN, USA
1 posted 2000-03-28 09:38 PM


i really really enjoy your format. and your word choice is excellent as well.
jann elizabeth

 Love is so short, and forgetting so long.
-Pablo Neruda

Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
2 posted 2000-03-29 12:36 PM


Great work and of course you don't need that stuff, it needs you is a wonderful way of dealing with it! Well done  

 There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
3 posted 2000-03-29 12:37 PM


Thinking about it more, I've decided to close this for the drug references.  People can still read it, yet not respond.  If you have any questions please email me.
Isis

 There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



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