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morteZ
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since 2000-03-16
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0 posted 2000-03-28 08:43 PM


I left her on an island
It was deserted, I think
I think now
That I could have said no more eloquently
But it is a history now
In a forgotten book
By a forgotten author
Somewhere, covered in the dust of the sun
Pity, I miss her.


 "Is there another sadness besides that of death?
Definitly not, because true sadness is black,
devoid of charms, and dreamless."

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Hope, tears, and renewal
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since 2000-03-27
Posts 74

1 posted 2000-03-28 08:49 PM


Great poem... "the dust of the sun" may someday cover us all...
Jannel
Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492
Muncie, IN, USA
2 posted 2000-03-28 09:40 PM


very cool as well. actually i like this one even better. i love the dust in the sun line. quickly becoming a big fan.  
jann elizabeth

 Love is so short, and forgetting so long.
-Pablo Neruda

danni
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since 1999-11-20
Posts 688
wisconsin
3 posted 2000-03-29 01:34 AM


yet another great work. how true, we cannot change what is done.

 i love too much, and not enough.

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