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Isis
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since 1999-09-06
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Sunny Queensland

0 posted 2000-03-28 05:58 PM


He is suffering,
I feel his exhaustion and pain,
Hopes are fading,
Will he ever trust again?

Muse to myself, friend to many,
Many, many good things you'll find,
But personally his life is a battle field,
Where is contentment and peace of mind?

I share his pain, know it well myself,
Each new day somewhat feared,
Not knowing what will happened,
Will you be hated or revered?

Endless questions,
Often unanswered,
Sometimes even doubting inner self,
Sometimes it's so overwhelming, all too complicated.

Draw strength from me my friend,
As I draw some from you,
And never lose that knowledge,
All the wonders of you.

From one who knows those trials,
Who knows those feelings of helplessness,
Please don't forget to look around,
And truly see the ways you ARE blessed..



 There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



© Copyright 2000 Isis - All Rights Reserved
Sandra Cox
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since 2000-03-24
Posts 48
Essex, London,UK
1 posted 2000-03-28 06:01 PM


Great work.  Whoever you wrote this for should feel very lucky to have someone think so much of them.

Best Wishes

Sandra

dhuron
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since 2000-03-19
Posts 476

2 posted 2000-03-28 06:02 PM


Wonderful Poem Isis,

Really made me think..so true the words you speak but it is hard to look around when you know nothing else.

 The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship."

--Ralph Waldo Emerson


Isis
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Sunny Queensland
3 posted 2000-03-28 06:43 PM


Thanks Guys!!  Hope it reminds him of the special man he is and always will be.....

 There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2000-03-28 06:53 PM


Beautiful writing from a lovely woman....I like this.  I agree we must never fail to count our blessings.   James
Isis
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5 posted 2000-03-28 06:56 PM


Exactly James, no matter how hard or bad things seem, there is always something to be grateful for, be it little or large.  And most importantly we must always remember and see the good in ourselves...

 There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA
6 posted 2000-03-28 09:20 PM


Isis....Wonderful words.  I really like this one.  You are so very right, no matter how bad things seem there is always something to be thankful for....in ourselves and in others as well.  Hopefully, his burden will be lifted in time and love will lead the way.

 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

Sven
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Posts 14937
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7 posted 2000-03-28 10:32 PM


Thank you Isis. . . it's just what I needed tonight. . . I'm glad to have you as a friend and kindred in my life. . . to remind me of the things that are most important. . .

And I hope that I can do the same for you. . .

----------------------------------------------------

 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
8 posted 2000-03-28 11:55 PM


You always do Sven, so this is my thanks to you hon.. *HUGS*  

 There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



Broken Wings
Member
since 2000-03-18
Posts 157
Miami, FL.
9 posted 2000-03-29 01:24 AM


WONDERFUL! i agree there is always something to be grateful for....even tho at times its so hard to see them.


take care  

Broken Wings


 "As you learn and grow, you will realize the greater the pain, the greater the growth."
-IYANLA VANZANT


SEA
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10 posted 2000-03-29 05:02 PM


Isis~ this is so very loving. Very sweet. -SEA
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11 posted 2000-03-29 05:08 PM


This is an awesome poem... so sweet.
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