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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Legend Blackest pitch of night Innocence will not prevail In darkest dungeons Love has failed Removed was the armour That exposed Satan’s soul Even pleads of desperation Won’t deliver from the devil’s hole Speak no more of freedom Dark ears only listen with a grin In flames of fearless fire To late to repent your sin A sacred soul up for sale The devil will always buy in the end Eternity in hideous Hell Forever to partake in his legend Marina Mar 20 2000 |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
Wow, that was great...sending chills. I love the pure darkness in it..great poem The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship." --Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Blackest pitch of night Innocence will not prevail In darkest dungeons Love has failed ------------- A sacred soul up for sale The devil will always buy in the end Eternity in hideous Hell Forever to partake in his legend ------------ way cool, Marina came over to the dark to play  this is awesome girl...enchanting and chilling at the same time...very deep and dark... take care, jm Do you live by the book, do you play by the rules Do you care what is thought by others about you If this day is all that is promised to you Do you live for the present, the future the past... tracy chapman |
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Jannel Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492Muncie, IN, USA |
very nice. it started to thunder as i read this and that made it even more eerie. I loved some of the alliterations. jannel Dont wake the dead, Wake the dying, Don't change what you've said, Change what you're saying. |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
dhuron,thank you very much JM,I respect and apprecaite your feedback at anytime...thank you jannel, thank you and I'm not sure I would want to read this in a thunderstorm. Marina |
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