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Veil_Gypsy
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since 2000-03-27
Posts 44
Trapped in Veils of Starlight, and happy to be on my cosmic trail

0 posted 2000-03-27 06:50 PM


Veils  Of  Shadow


In halls were whispers and lies are waiting to be uttered
Lives a woman, A governess of the nothing within us all
Sitting on a throne of once great kings and they glory shredded about them
Of what was there might, Remounts of there past
Locks of great remitments of state queens empress alike
Are all but threads of her loom

With which she weaves the tapestry of sorrow
Every misery and woe she has sown
To curse the day I ever stepped foot apon her fortress of emptiness
Hollow was the way that lead me to her
Following blindly the beacon mystic lights
I thought I had found illumination
Only to be entrapped in my own darkness

She looked up at me
All the worlds pain had etched at her youth
Her eyes gray with emptiness
Not an amber of hope was astir in her
In a flash of her memory I witnessed all

Pandora's Ignorance
Ophielas Madness
Medra's Sacrifice
Eve's deception
Mankind's wickedness

I was weakend by her bitterness that had stolen my innocent nature
I was washed away with all this
She screamed as if a disesed monk
To leave and to take my self far away from her

Even as I obeyed
This vision was not removed from me

Now veil of shadow engulf me
What you call progress I call destruction
What you call future
I feel its just another session in our pride
As often I fade between the masks of joy and sorrow
I often feel as if I were condemned to were this woman resides
In my inner most chamber of my heart
Finding a new fortress to possess within me
There is no warmth beneath my winter
No calm in my Strom


Now I dwell in shadows
In halls were whispers and lies are waiting to be told


 The Experince of survial is the key to the gravity of love....Enigma

© Copyright 2000 Rochelle Adams - All Rights Reserved
Veil_Gypsy
Junior Member
since 2000-03-27
Posts 44
Trapped in Veils of Starlight, and happy to be on my cosmic trail
1 posted 2000-03-27 06:57 PM


I do hope you enjoy this step in to my maddness at times I get depressed in winter and it comes though in my work , I find it very refreshing to get it all out on paper, and this women I call the mother of shadows is a women and her den of sorrows I viset at times , I have learned to let her go it was hard becasue you so often hide behind the pain and the light seems to far off I understand you all and your work , and hope you will enjoy this poem...

Love Always
The Gypsy.....


 The Experince of survial is the key to the gravity of love....Enigma

Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
2 posted 2000-03-27 08:15 PM


Welcome to Passions and the dark forum.  My God you took us on a wonderful journey.  I so enjoyed this.  What a vivid world you've created.  Simply wonderful, and oh the tales you could share with us!! Great work  

 There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



dhuron
Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476

3 posted 2000-03-27 11:12 PM


Welcome to Dark Passions indeed.

I really enjoyed this one. And I hope to read more from you.  The journeys you can take us on...


daniel

 The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship."

--Ralph Waldo Emerson


Jannel
Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492
Muncie, IN, USA
4 posted 2000-03-28 01:34 AM


beautiful, incredible story. great allusions. and such a vivid picture. welcome welcome. looking forward to more/
jannel

 Dont wake the dead,
Wake the dying,
Don't change what you've said,
Change what you're saying.

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