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StarrGazer
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since 2000-03-05
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Texas

0 posted 2000-03-27 09:27 AM


I know the truth
A family living lies
All dressed up
Wearing perfection's guise
But I know the secret
The skeleton in the  closet's me
Taunted by the darkness
That just won't let me be
Why can't they admit
Just once that they know
But they tell me it didn't happen
Just to let it go
Branded a liar  
Paying for his sins
Tormented endlessly
Again and again
I knew things that
A child should not
But "nothing happened"
It's best forgot
How easy for them
They are not me
Did nothing wrong
But I'm still guilty!
My mind cannot rest
Something I could have done
Carrying around this baggage
That seems to way a ton
I didn't stop him
I didn't say no
I was a little kid
How was I supposed to know
NO EXCUSES!
I knew it was wrong
Yet I participated
I played along
Guilty by association
Maybe that much is true
Memories driving me insane
What was a child to do ???



 "A poet is one who spends a lifetime standing out in thunderstorms, waiting to be hit by lightning"
~Randal Jarrell~



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Michael
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Posts 7666
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1 posted 2000-03-27 10:30 AM


Wow - was not expecting to come into this.  Powerful poem StarrGazer.  "Guilt by Association"... I am struck by this piece.

Michael

Broken
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since 2000-03-12
Posts 271
The woods
2 posted 2000-03-27 01:49 PM



You impressed me with this one StarrGazer. I felt your pain reading it.

*****
I knew it was wrong
Yet I participated
I played along
Guilty by association
Maybe that much is true
Memories driving me insane
What was a child to do ???

*****
Perfect ending, very very well written! Hang in there, hug to you

Yours truly
Broken



 I`m running out of time, I`m out of step and closing down, I never sleep for wanting hours the empty hours of greed. And uselessly always the need to feel again the real belief, of something more than mockery. If only I could fill my heart with love. -Robert Smith

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2000-03-27 03:08 PM


Somehow thru writing poetry and revealing the pain from your heart I hope the truth will be revealed and your mind will find rest.  I know it is a journey.  Take care.  James
Dark Enchantress
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since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258
meet Morgana
4 posted 2000-03-27 04:27 PM


This one really hit me Starr....I relate to it so well...for once I wish that I didn't understand. But I do... *hugglez* I know it'll always be there for you..just like it will for me...but James is right...by writing about it and sharing your feelings your helping to ease that pain. Great poem Starr...once again you've left your mark.

                Yours truly,
                   Angel


 "The dark weight of the hour
humming madly
filling my head
with blood
and sorrow
and dread
the executioner's song."
-Jewel
"The Dark Bells"

~*Angel of Darkness*~



Virgo
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since 2000-03-27
Posts 46
tx
5 posted 2000-03-27 05:00 PM


I can relate to your poem...I've been in the same situation myself.  
Jannel
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 492
Muncie, IN, USA
6 posted 2000-03-28 01:02 AM


very beautiful. thank you so much for sharing your pain with us.
jannel

 Dont wake the dead,
Wake the dying,
Don't change what you've said,
Change what you're saying.

StarrGazer
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since 2000-03-05
Posts 679
Texas
7 posted 2000-03-28 02:49 AM


Michael funny how our pens seem to take over and write for us sometimes  eh?

Broken thanks for your kind comments and sometimes it seems like I've no choice but to hang in there I've becomea sucker for pain perhaps

James thanks with such wonderful people here I think I'm finding the journey  a lot easier than some have it  

Dark Enchantress ((((hugzzzz)))) thanks for understanding seems far too many people have been in this situation a sadness of its own right ...

Virgo like I've said I'm still trying to deal with this myself but if you ever need to talk ... I'm just a click away

Jannel thanks  writing is such a release for me it screams when I want to scream but remain silent  


 "A poet is one who spends a lifetime standing out in thunderstorms, waiting to be hit by lightning"
~Randal Jarrell~



Hope, tears, and renewal
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since 2000-03-27
Posts 74

8 posted 2000-03-28 08:53 PM


Incredibly powerful... I can feel your pain, to an extent.  Beautiful poem.
Sven
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East Lansing, MI USA
9 posted 2000-03-28 10:35 PM


Excellent Starr. . .

You have indeed been through much. . . but remember that the pen leads us on the path of healing. . . you have taken that first step. . .

-----------------------------------------------------

 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Tess
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since 2000-03-22
Posts 288
Australia
10 posted 2000-03-29 10:04 AM


Your poem stirs compassion and sadness in me for you and for what you have been through..and are going through....feel the warmth and love of all the people who so obviously care about you....
I also felt anger though..that things like this can happen...and people make children feel that they are to blame..when they are simply the innocent victims of crimes that should not happen!
Take care...

 "Love is the only drug you can take that will convince you each time
that you've never had it before."
~author unknown~



StarrGazer
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since 2000-03-05
Posts 679
Texas
11 posted 2000-03-29 02:39 PM


H T & R, Sven, Tess thanks for responding to my poem ...


 "A poet is one who spends a lifetime standing out in thunderstorms, waiting to be hit by lightning"
~Randal Jarrell~



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