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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
I know you i see your heart Deep in your words You see Where are you inside me A place a memory forming How do you touch so deep Woken from endless sleep What words What words Do you see how deep You can touch with a line A simple statement yours yours Mine mine all who see are blessed And still the words are sublime What do you see in words What do you feel in this I am mere ghosts passing I am all a light show Incapable of realising No thought as yours fly No creation as makeing me cry I am only darkness From which light shies away But your words bring into All the shades of night and day. Did you write the Book of Love And do you have faith in God above If the Bible tells you so Do you believe in rock 'n roll Can music save your mortal soul And can you teach me how to dance real slow |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I am mere ghosts passing I am all a light show Incapable of realising No thought as yours fly No creation as makeing me cry I am only darkness From which light shies away --------------------- poet of darkness in search of the light your words, your visions carry on past the night light of day, does not shy away its rays reflect on your verse your talent lies in the darkness it is your gift...never your curse jm Walter, this poem is exquisite. It is simply stunnning, perfection from your pen. It is so evident in these words...that you are indeed most "capable of releasing"...and "realizing"... and the light shines brilliantly. I am deeply touched by this poem. take care, janet marie  < !signature-->Do you live by the book, do you play by the rules Do you care what is thought by others about you If this day is all that is promised to you Do you live for the present, the future the past... tracy chapman [This message has been edited by Janet Marie (edited 03-27-2000).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
sending this one back to the top...  favortisim...perhaps...(smile) jm Do you live by the book, do you play by the rules Do you care what is thought by others about you If this day is all that is promised to you Do you live for the present, the future the past... tracy chapman |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Simply Beautiful Walter, five stars ***** from me  There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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