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ShadowHeart
Junior Member
since 2000-03-25
Posts 49


0 posted 2000-03-26 07:58 PM


In the Shadows
lurk the fears,
the fears are mine
and yours.

In the shadows
what are the fears,
what do we hide
from them for?

Fears of past
and present alike,
Fears of the future
not being bright.

Fears that cause pain
for many years,
Why don't we cast them
out of sight?

Through the shadows
we must go,
to get to the
fearless tide.

Through the shadows
will we go,
and discover the fears
are on our side?


 Love is our greatest weakness
but when it's found,
it's our greatest strength.

© Copyright 2000 ShadowHeart - All Rights Reserved
Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
1 posted 2000-03-26 08:02 PM


Welcome to the dark forum and the passions family of friends.  Loved your first post, such deep codgetations!  Well done  

 There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



dhuron
Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476

2 posted 2000-03-26 09:45 PM


Welcome Shadowheart,

You poem asks many questions I ask myself...why not cast them away??


who will ever know?

great job

Lonely Shadow
Member
since 2000-03-14
Posts 128
Virginia
3 posted 2000-03-26 10:43 PM


Great poem shadowheart... this poem tells me what I ask myself everyday... we must cast our fears aside, if not, we can never grasp the things that would bring us joy and contentment.

 To find true love is to know true happiness... to lose true love is to lose everything

Walter Poe
Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787

4 posted 2000-03-28 06:04 AM


Great poem liked much

very strong words

Walter

  Did you write the Book of Love
And do you have faith in God above
If the Bible tells you so
Do you believe in rock 'n roll
Can music save your mortal soul
And can you teach me how to dance real slow


Dark Enchantress
Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258
meet Morgana
5 posted 2000-03-28 07:21 AM


Welcome to Dark Passions ShadowHeart.... great first post. I really enjoyed this one.  

                Yours truly,
                   Angel


 "The dark weight of the hour
humming madly
filling my head
with blood
and sorrow
and dread
the executioner's song."
-Jewel
"The Dark Bells"

~*Angel of Darkness*~



Veil_Gypsy
Junior Member
since 2000-03-27
Posts 44
Trapped in Veils of Starlight, and happy to be on my cosmic trail
6 posted 2000-03-28 08:22 AM


Very much enjoyed this trek into the darkness..well done!!

The Gypsy Bard


Sandra Cox
Junior Member
since 2000-03-24
Posts 48
Essex, London,UK
7 posted 2000-03-28 01:49 PM


Powerful words, good first post, well done!

Sandra

SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676
with you
8 posted 2000-03-28 04:44 PM


ShadowHeart~ Welcome!   casting fears aside is a hard thing to do! Some people enjoy their fears. I just try to face it and get past it. Ugh. Great poem! -SEA
Hope, tears, and renewal
Member
since 2000-03-27
Posts 74

9 posted 2000-03-28 08:12 PM


Hey... Awesome poem.  Everyone has they're own fears... daemons, if you would... good luck in conquering them.
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