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StarryEyed
Junior Member

since 2000-03-22

Posts 20
Florida

0 posted 2000-03-25 06:36 PM

You are not worth my tears,
But yet they continue to fall.
Out of my life means out of my mind,
Now I really begin to bawl.

I need to get over you,
You've caused me too much pain.
Yet you are the one I want,
Life was so simple until you came.

Why do you torture me so,
You attempt to still be my friend,
But seeing you brings me strife,
For my love for you will never end.

Life with you was so bright,
Why did you want it all to end.
I wish for you on every star,
I wish to have you again.

But through all the tears and pain I know,
I guess we weren't just meant be to be at all.
That is the one fact that hurts,
Yes that is the most painful fact of all.

It takes a minute to give your heart away,
It takes as second for it to break.
It takes a lifetime to forget that special someone,
And the impact that they make.

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

1 posted 2000-03-25 08:07 PM

oops,is this personal?if it is, i do hope you feel better now....keep writing....writing provides an outlet to vent out all our frustrations,hurt,pain...etc

i think this was very heart-felt.i esp like this line
"I wish for you on every star"

Bronx
Member

since 2000-01-28

Posts 84
Oviedo, Florida, U.S.

2 posted 2000-03-25 08:41 PM

hey-
love the poem...Once again it was Wonderful!
bye
Bronx

Be careful!
It's a jungle out there!

ShadowHeart
Junior Member

since 2000-03-25

Posts 49

3 posted 2000-03-25 09:55 PM

I love your poem...it's really good, despite you not thinking so. Is it how you feel right now? You know I'll always be here for you if you wanna talk.

Love is our greatest weakness
but when it's found,
it's our greatest strength.

Dark_kisses_Within
Senior Member

since 2000-03-21

Posts 680
Kansas

4 posted 2000-03-26 01:28 AM

Nice poem. So full of expression and feelings. It takes alot to get over someone we love. But let "time" heal you.

Peace,
Dark_kisses_within

I do not love you for being perfect.....
I love you for being perfect for me!!

Sandra Cox
Junior Member

since 2000-03-24

Posts 48
Essex, London,UK

5 posted 2000-03-26 06:29 PM

Wonderful poem. I can relate to it totally, I know just how you felt when you wrote it. Time is a great healer even though we don't realise it at the time!

Best Wishes

Sandra

Dream_Cloud
Junior Member

since 2000-03-25

Posts 10
Daytona Beach, FL USA

6 posted 2000-03-26 08:13 PM

I like this poem alot...showing the heartbreak and tragedy of a slit-up. Something most people can relate to well!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2000-03-27 02:58 PM

The writing is wonderful..the message one I share...looking back on my relationship I determined that we should have only remained friends... because after all was done I was the only one who had fell in love. James

Virgo
Junior Member

since 2000-03-27

Posts 46
tx

8 posted 2000-03-27 05:10 PM

Great poem...give it time...the pain eventually does go away.

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