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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland 
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Ancient castle corridors, Like my life all spotlessly clean, I carried it all for so long now, Now I just want to lean. It's sad to realise my realities, I am the one with the backbone, I hold everyone up, comfort them and help them, But no one is there to catch me, if I stumble, I'm all alone. I want to worship him, Want him to be my everything, Want him to be my Lord, Want him to make my heart sing. I'm a woman, just look and you will see, Yes, I like the door opened for me, I don't like mowing, or weed eating, I want to be treated like a queen. Don't want a life of ancient ruins, My hopes, my fears and dreams, Don't like feeling if I flounder, My whole world would come apart at the seams. Really listen when I speak, And understand when I need some sympathy, You're supposed to look after me, Be the man and let my heart be free... There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Darla New Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 8 |
You are so very right..And I hope he does just that for you.. That's what is wrong with so many people they do not listen.. I hope you find that I really do.. And thank you so much for your help.. I enjoyed reading this.. Thank you ....  |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Thanks Darla There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Ancient castle corridors, Like my life all spotlessly clean, I carried it all for so long now, Now I just want to lean. It's sad to realise my realities, I am the one with the backbone, I hold everyone up, comfort them and help them, But no one is there to catch me, if I stumble, I'm all alone. ------------------------------ oh my sweet poetic sister...you speak my heart in this one...the last stanza sums it up for me...oh how i understand... beautiful poem...love the ancient metaphors great work, jm Do you live by the book, do you play by the rules Do you care what is thought by others about you If this day is all that is promised to you Do you live for the present, the future the past... tracy chapman |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Isis, Great work....just loved the ancient theme here. Hope you get what you want. Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
It's amazing what a little attention can do. . . Sometimes, only you can catch yourself. . .and other times, you have to watch where you step. . . and other times, there are friends there to catch you. . . Excellent words, my friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
And I want the world to know I am so thankful to have a wonderful friend and kindred who is always there with softly spoken words of encouragement and love There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful poem with thoughts right out of your heart. Yes Isis we all need and desire someone to admire and appreciate us...you have said it well...and I hope the right person is listening and takes action. Stay strong hon...and keep sharing the softness of your heart. James |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
It's sad to realise my realities, I am the one with the backbone, I hold everyone up, comfort them and help them, But no one is there to catch me, if I stumble, I'm all alone. Isis, those lines tell my tale all too well. Great Work, but your poems are always great. You will get what you deserve. Daniel |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Thanks Daniel, James, Janet Marie, Lone Wolf and Sven There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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