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TanAngel Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 168Oviedo, Florida, USA |
I am leaving passions for a while...nothing against you but a lot is going on and I need time to write depressing stuff without people freaking out or thinking I am gonna commite sucide just 'cause I mention it...well...you will be the only forum that I post, but I am not gonna post until I get myself together...so here I go... Holding a grudge beneath an inviting face Disarming you with a cardboard replica of myself...remove yours and I shall remove mine Behind that mask is a scared little girl down on her knees Loving you shall never set me free Standing confident and tall do you see inside? Chin up head held high? Is that who you see? Do you even love me for me? "Sheltered from the world you scare yourself from the rain...away from the dark sickning fog that so stumblest unto your heart...for no true poet holds loves hand..."-TanAngel |
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Broken Wings Member
since 2000-03-18
Posts 157Miami, FL. |
I'm sorry to see you go...I wish you all the strength to overcome the storm. btw, great poem! **HUG** take care, Broken Wings "As you learn and grow, you will realize the greater the pain, the greater the growth." -IYANLA VANZANT |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Writer's rhetorical eh? That's good.. glad you let us know you will be away for a while. I'll expect plenty of good dark poetry when you return!!  Look after yourself *Namaste* There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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~Venus~ Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 128 |
Hey babe. I'm gonna miss your work here, even though I see it elsewhere! Namely in your comp. book. ^_~ Just remember, everyone at one point, especially me, is a small, scared child on there knees, shaking, wanting someone to love them for who they really are. ~goddess of love, passion, and desire~ I'll be here...why? I'll be waiting...for what? 'll be waiting for you so...if you come here, you'll find me... I promise. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
TA...this newest poem of yours is excellent....I have seen a growth and maturation in your poems in the past months...it has been nice to watch you develope your style..... take care, and remember in our writing...comes our healing... jm Do you live by the book, do you play by the rules Do you care what is thought by others about you If this day is all that is promised to you Do you live for the present, the future the past... tracy chapman |
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Jannel Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492Muncie, IN, USA |
i loved the cardboard cut out image. that was an excellent line. sad to see you go. hurry back to us! jannel Dont wake the dead, Wake the dying, Don't change what you've said, Change what you're saying. |
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StarryEyed Junior Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 20Florida |
Hey TA, i really like this poem. i hope you start to write back soon so i can read more. Take care! Unspoken love is the loudest of all |
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Angel Usagi Junior Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 11 |
I love your poem. This is Bunny. I got a forum here. |
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Aiden Kelly Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 148Ft. Wayne, IN USA |
sorry to see you go. i wish you all the strength and hope that you ever need or desire! love to you! good luck. this piece is absolutely beautiful. i love the use of rhetorical questions! good job! |
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Sandra Cox Junior Member
since 2000-03-24
Posts 48Essex, London,UK |
I wish you luck in whatever it is you seek! Read my poem, 'For all my new friends...' it will let you know we are all thinking of you. Take care. Sandra x |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
TA~ You are very good at expressing hurt and feeling misunderstood. We all want the love that excepts us for who we are underneath our masks. I hope you come back soon.-SEA |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
TA WOW!!! This left me feeling wow...I can't even put it into words. I have to say though it was AWESOME! Please take care of yourself...take as much time as you need for yourself. We all will be here waiting for ya when u get back. Take care! AMY ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
I've always enjoyed your poetry. Thanx sooo much for the wonderful insights. I'm sorry that you'll be leaving the forums for a while, but it's all good eventually. Alica |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
Tan Angel...i am reading you after so long... and now you are leaving... I hope you are back soon... take care...and believe in yourself... All the best...will wait till next... If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao |
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