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StarrGazer
Senior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 679
Texas

0 posted 2000-03-23 01:49 PM


~*Tried to put into words what this forum means to me but in the end I come up lacking the words to express it ...

A dark soul is showed the light
formed in lines that others write
and though those words are also dark
truth has finally hit its mark
sometimes we all feel alone
but we're not the only one pain has known
words inspiring a blind hope
throwing out the rescue rope
baring of souls- a poems the cost
realizing it's something gained not lost
suddenly it's plain to see
Passions has become my family !!!




 "A poet is one who spends a lifetime standing out in thunderstorms, waiting to be hit by lightning"
~Randal Jarrell~



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Aiden Kelly
Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 148
Ft. Wayne, IN USA
1 posted 2000-03-23 03:21 PM


i love it, shan!! this is exactly how i feel about this place too!    you've really captured the essence of this place! great poem, hon!  
Broken Wings
Member
since 2000-03-18
Posts 157
Miami, FL.
2 posted 2000-03-23 07:14 PM


i also loved it....although i'm new here i have these same feelings for passions.

THANK YOU for putting them into words.


take care,
Broken Wings  


 "As you learn and grow, you will realize the greater the pain, the greater the growth."
-IYANLA VANZANT



Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

3 posted 2000-03-25 02:37 PM


Starr....you did a perfect job...I agree this place does become like a second home...a second family...and even better we dont have to cook or clean up after them  
very nice sentiments in your poem
take care, jm

 Do you live by the book, do you play by the rules
Do you care what is thought by others about you
If this day is all that is promised to you
Do you live for the present, the future the past...
tracy chapman


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