navwin » Archives » Dark Poetry #1 » sweet sweet breath
Dark Poetry #1
Post A Reply Post New Topic sweet sweet breath Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
mojar
Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 169
granbury, texas, usa

0 posted 2000-03-22 11:07 PM



sweet sweet breath

sweet sweet breath on cherished skin,
the softest kiss as the day begins.
treasured night of memories,
endless passion ore calmest seas.

dawn breaks eternal fair,
with the dampness of the dew.
impressions made and not forgotten,
my mind absorbed with you.

hold me to your bosom tight,
gently kiss me fears away.
tell me that you love me,
as the night gives in to day.

the freshness of the morning air,
within my dreams i vividly see.
draw me close and hold me tight,
and never ever leave.

love me now and love me tomorrow,
spill your breath upon my skin.
let the sunrises come and go,
each day we will begin again.

mo

© Copyright 2000 mojar - All Rights Reserved
mcclain
Junior Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 13

1 posted 2000-03-22 11:35 PM


very nice. i like the flow.
demonic~angel
Member
since 2000-03-11
Posts 54
Kansas
2 posted 2000-03-23 12:46 PM


Great work...Imagery is awesome...Flows like water...*huggz* wonderfully written
demonic~angel
Member
since 2000-03-11
Posts 54
Kansas
3 posted 2000-03-23 12:46 PM


Great work...Imagery is awesome...Flows like water...*huggz* wonderfully written

 Messenger of fear in sight
Dark deception kills the light
~Metallica~

danni
Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688
wisconsin
4 posted 2000-03-24 12:50 PM


i think this is one of the most beautiful pieces i have read by you. your poems just keep getting better my friend. always a treat when you post every now and then.

 i love too much, and not enough.

Jannel
Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492
Muncie, IN, USA
5 posted 2000-03-24 01:13 AM


beautiful, reminds me of a lullabye. *sigh*
jannel

 Dont wake the dead,
Wake the dying,
Don't change what you've said,
Change what you're saying.

mojar
Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 169
granbury, texas, usa
6 posted 2000-03-24 03:53 PM


thank you all for such sweet comments, danni everything you have to say is music to my ears darlin. thanks mo
Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA
7 posted 2000-03-25 12:14 PM


Beautiful words!!!  

 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
8 posted 2000-03-25 03:06 AM


Soft and romantic writing...really enjoyed reading this.  James
Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Dark Poetry #1 » sweet sweet breath

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary