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PoeticKnight
Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA

0 posted 2000-03-22 02:47 PM


Another day older
And what do I have to show for it?

What will make me immortal?
Is it never dying,
Or the works I create,
Like busy ants
Building, always building
Moving ever in vain
In their doomed mounds
To be destroyed by whim
Of Nature or Man,
Or by their own hand

Pitiless time marches on
Cruel Fate, and even crueler Hope
Gathers me along with everyone
In its tightening grip
Some few slipping between fingers
Postponing their inevitable destination
Only pausing briefly
Until falling faster,
They hit the ground suddenly
And then what does it all matter?

Just another day older
And still,
What do I have to show for it?


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Broken Wings
Member
since 2000-03-18
Posts 157
Miami, FL.
1 posted 2000-03-22 03:32 PM


Just another day older
And still,
What do I have to show for it?

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ahhh...i ask myself the same question everyday. i guess we have to just hope that the little things we do day to day somehow makes a difference.
Great Poem!

take care, **hug**
Broken Wings  

 "As you learn and grow, you will realize the greater the pain, the greater the growth."
-IYANLA VANZANT



PoeticKnight
Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA
2 posted 2000-03-22 03:38 PM


Thank you very much Broken Wings!
Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

3 posted 2000-03-22 04:19 PM


Another day older
And what do I have to show for it?
What will make me immortal?
Is it never dying,
Or the works I create,
Like busy ants
Building, always building
Moving ever in vain
In their doomed mounds
To be destroyed by whim
Of Nature or Man,
Or by their own hand

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monotonous isnt it...
deep, deep deep, ...you are...
and to answer your question...what do you have to show for it...a bazillion awesome poems.*S*
stalking your depths...
your jm

 and you can say baby...
baby can I hold you tonight
maybe if told you the right words...
at the right time,
you'd be mine...
baby can I hold you tonight...
tracy chapman



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