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PoeticKnight
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since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA

0 posted 2000-03-22 10:23 AM


Devastation
Destruction

Ruin,
All I ever seem to bring,
And misery follows
Wherever I go

It might be better
If I was alone
And spared everyone
From my mind

All I ever wanted
Was something
And now I have
Nothing

And that’s all I deserve,

My ruination


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Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-03-22 11:05 AM


It might be better
If I was alone
And spared everyone
From my mind
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well,  as you know me too well, then you know I have to disagree with this one..but I understand what your saying in this...
we are our own worst enemy most of the time.
stalking your mind...
your jm


 and you can say baby...
baby can I hold you tonight
maybe if told you the right words...
at the right time,
you'd be mine...
baby can I hold you tonight...
tracy chapman



PoeticKnight
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since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA
2 posted 2000-03-22 01:31 PM


Thanks janet, this along with dead souls and a couple others are the closest things to being actually me...i knew you'd know that.
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