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shagirl
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since 2000-03-20
Posts 18
southbeach, usa.

0 posted 2000-03-21 01:08 PM


In The Heat Of The Moment

In the heat of the moment,
Wild passions flare,
Tounges,teeth and fingertips,
Aching to touch and share.

Invisible boundries designed to quell this heat,
With a shiver and a chill,
Anticipation the red flame,
That melts an iron will.

Passions born of hell,
Yet known to God as pleasure,
Fingertips burn skin,
While they touch soft as a feather.

A dance in near darkness,
Awakes once more this passion,
Erotic this crucifiction,
Outdated by modern fashion.

The world drifts off,
As we dance in this fire,
Lips touching skin,
Anamalistic this desire.

The tempo grows faster,
Hips interlocked not breaking,
Hearts pound,brain swirls,
At this risk we are taking.

The cd a rumble,
Like distant thunder,
Passion riding the storm,
Of the spell I`m under.

Lips along jaw lines,
Passions threaten to burn us,
Forged far below ,
In hades own furnace.

Lips upon lips,
Searing the flesh,
Bodies intertwined,
As to the music we mesh.

The beat so steady,
Unyeilding and strong,
More fuel to this fire,
As it hurls us along.

Control no longer,
It`s a distant reality,
As we fail once more ,
Within our mortality.

As two magnets,
With opposite poles,
A powerful union,
Of interlocked souls.


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Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-03-22 12:24 PM


shagirl...you must have read my mind...
SCORCHINGLY perfect poem   very welll written ... great pace to it...works the reader up to breathless..
seems spring fever has struck now in DP...its been rampant in open 6  LOL
take care, jm

 and you can say baby...
baby can I hold you tonight
maybe if told you the right words...
at the right time,
you'd be mine...
baby can I hold you tonight...
tracy chapman



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