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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Can’t stop the feelings That come with a rush Brightly colored memories That cascade through a hazy brain In moments that I cannot control, Nor would I, Even if I knew how I need to slow down Movements from day to day I have lost my imagination, My drive, the need to create; That thing which makes us human Where does my life go? So young to be over so soon I am not in control anymore I am losing ground to chaos Everything is spinning And flying so fast Nothing is clear I’ve got to hold on To something steady in my life But sadly, there is nothing |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Wonderful poem JML...I can relate to this piece very well...but keep reaching out...you'll find what it is that you need when the time comes.  Yours truly, Angel "The dark weight of the hour humming madly filling my head with blood and sorrow and dread the executioner's song." -Jewel "The Dark Bells" ~*Angel of Darkness*~ |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
JML another wonderful description of the way we all feel at times. There is ALWAYS hope hon, hope in writing, hope in friends, love and family. Hope the venting by writing this has helped somewhat.. Every day just a little keep reaching for the light and love in your world.. *hugs* There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I need to slow down Movements from day to day I have lost my imagination, My drive, the need to create; That thing which makes us human Where does my life go? So young to be over so soon I am not in control anymore I am losing ground to chaos Everything is spinning And flying so fast Nothing is clear I’ve got to hold on To something steady in my life But sadly, there is nothing ----------------- I can think of a few things...ya want me to list them  this is VERY good, so full of your emotions...you know how I love your desperation...(smile) "she's been here too few years...to feel this old" mb20 stalking you still, your jm and you can say baby... baby can I hold you tonight maybe if told you the right words... at the right time, you'd be mine... baby can I hold you tonight... tracy chapman |
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StarryEyed Junior Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 20Florida |
Hey that wuz a really great poem! i love the title too, something about that word draws me in. I liked the emotions in it. I could really relate to it. Take Care Unspoken love is the loudest of all |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
JML.. Your poem speaks many truths...spinning, lost control....nothing.... Stay strong, all will work out in time... |
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Jannel Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492Muncie, IN, USA |
very nice work. i especially liked In moments that I cannot control, Nor would I, Even if I knew how a great expression about how i have felt many times lately. this was wonderful Dont wake the dead, Wake the dying, Don't change what you've said, Change what you're saying. |
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