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Mai Ling
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since 2000-03-15
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0 posted 2000-03-21 01:54 AM


Pale crimson fill,
the calm twilight of your world
softly revealing,
the entity of tomorrow.


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Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-03-21 02:04 AM


how simply perfect...
serene and calming...
very lovely piece.
take care, jm

 and you can say baby...
baby can I hold you tonight
maybe if told you the right words...
at the right time,
you'd be mine...
baby can I hold you tonight...
tracy chapman



morteZ
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since 2000-03-16
Posts 17

2 posted 2000-03-21 10:50 PM


tommorrow is an entity of mystery indeed, one we can't touch.Reach out and there will be something.
Sven
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3 posted 2000-03-21 11:07 PM


I would call this, "Life's Ghost"

Beautiful Mai Ling. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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